Downside Up Snowman

Lodged on a high valley in this far town
People like to turn the world upside down
In winter sky overturns
The snow cover children churn
Snowmen they make do something new on own.

A fat snowman comes to park downside up
Sniffing the frozen ground with red nose sharp
To stay straight head needs to strain
Blood from the legs goes to brain
Twig hands won’t help if he wants to stand up.

December 24, 2017.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Allison Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 10:55 PM
congrats on your win Subimal:-) hugs Jan xx
Sinha-Roy Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 1:08 AM
Thank you, Jan.
Gauthier Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 4:03 PM
Congrats on your win, Subimal. Well done,.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 12:55 AM
Thank you, Line.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 1:23 PM
Congrats on your humorous piece Subimal.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 12:54 AM
Thank you, Richard.
Roper Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 8:21 PM
Congratulations on your win, Subimal, :) enjoyed the Limerick . Hugs Eve ~`*
Sinha-Roy Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 2:13 AM
Thank you, Eve.
May Avatar
December 24, 2017 at 6:44 AM
Nice limerick Subimal...GL in the contest
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 10:53 PM
Thank you, Jospeh.
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December 25, 2017 at 10:53 PM
Thank you, Jospeh.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 10:53 PM
Sorry for the Typo, Joseph.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 10:53 PM
Sorry for the Typo, Joseph.
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