Bl Devnath Poet Tanka

Downside Up of Confused World

nose started to see 
                                 with feeling sense of smelling 
                                      eyes started to smell 
                                  with feeling sense of picture 
                                down side up of confused world

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Andrea Dietrich June 10, 2016 at 9:24 PM cute idea in this one!! Bl Devnath June 13, 2016 at 10:06 AM Thanks my lovely smiling friend for beautiful comment. Loved always, bl

Constance La France June 10, 2016 at 6:15 PM bL, thought provoking.... Bl Devnath June 13, 2016 at 10:06 AM Thanks my lovely smiling friend for beautiful comment. Loved always, bl