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Downpours and Lovers

Football players huddle up Heavy rains puddle up Civilization, all muddled up ~ Carefree lovers cuddle up

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Bill Baker
Date: 10/19/2022 10:44:00 AM
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Yep, love is blind, and mindless time to time. Bill
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 10/16/2022 11:46:00 PM
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Civilization muddled up. there isn't a word to express how much of a muddle the world is in. Thank you, Gershon, well expressed as always. Take care, Shirley
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/16/2022 8:47:00 AM
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each line has its impact - but line 3 makes us stress and as for line 4 civilization is one great mess but carefree lovers cuddling could be the line with most success. Blessings and hugs, JENNIFER.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/16/2022 3:16:00 PM
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Yeah, might as well have love, esp. when everything else is messed up. :)
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Valsa George
Date: 10/15/2022 10:25:00 PM
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"Civilization, all muddled up"..... and everything is sadly messed up. Such a situation who can clear up.... is the question before us.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/16/2022 3:15:00 PM
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That is. indeed, a very good question, Valsa. I think that the pathway for you to clear it up is wide open. ~ Just sayin'
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/15/2022 3:52:00 PM
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Yes they do my friend...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/15/2022 8:13:00 PM
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I decided that the last two words were 'cuddle up.' I was thinking of 'pucker up' though... ~ Stiff Lips
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 10/14/2022 5:05:00 PM
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You used up all the "uddles!" I couldn't find one to send back. It does make that great soggy sound. Liz
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/15/2022 8:12:00 PM
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That truly befuddles me, Liz. Happy weekend to you, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/14/2022 11:50:00 AM
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You brought this together nicely! Wuz up!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/15/2022 8:11:00 PM
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Wuz up, you ask... The sky, say I. ~ Things are Looking UP
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/14/2022 9:45:00 AM
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Good one Gershon :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/14/2022 10:36:00 AM
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Thank you so much, Heidi. Happy Friday and Happy Weekend to you! ~ Gershon
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Becky Forbes
Date: 10/13/2022 8:40:00 PM
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I'll take the last one, please!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/13/2022 8:56:00 PM
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Wise choice there, Becky! Tee-hee

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