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Downpours and Lovers

Football players huddle up
      Heavy rains puddle up

    Civilization, all muddled up
      ~ Carefree lovers cuddle up

Copyright © Gershon Wolf | Year Posted 2022

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October 19, 2022 at 10:44 AM

Yep, love is blind, and mindless time to time. Bill

Shirley Hawkins

October 16, 2022 at 11:46 PM

Civilization muddled up. there isn't a word to express how much of a muddle the world is in. Thank you, Gershon, well expressed as always. Take care, Shirley

Jennifer Proxenos

October 16, 2022 at 8:47 AM

each line has its impact - but line 3 makes us stress and as for line 4 civilization is one great mess but carefree lovers cuddling could be the line with most success. Blessings and hugs, JENNIFER.

October 16, 2022 at 3:16 PM

Yeah, might as well have love, esp. when everything else is messed up. :)

October 15, 2022 at 10:25 PM

"Civilization, all muddled up"..... and everything is sadly messed up. Such a situation who can clear up.... is the question before us.

October 16, 2022 at 3:15 PM

That is. indeed, a very good question, Valsa. I think that the pathway for you to clear it up is wide open. ~ Just sayin'

October 15, 2022 at 3:52 PM

Yes they do my friend...

October 15, 2022 at 8:13 PM

I decided that the last two words were 'cuddle up.' I was thinking of 'pucker up' though... ~ Stiff Lips

Elizabeth Mccann

October 14, 2022 at 5:05 PM

You used up all the "uddles!" I couldn't find one to send back. It does make that great soggy sound. Liz

October 15, 2022 at 8:12 PM

That truly befuddles me, Liz. Happy weekend to you, Gershon

October 14, 2022 at 11:50 AM

You brought this together nicely! Wuz up!

October 15, 2022 at 8:11 PM

Wuz up, you ask... The sky, say I. ~ Things are Looking UP

October 14, 2022 at 9:45 AM

Good one Gershon :)

October 14, 2022 at 10:36 AM

Thank you so much, Heidi. Happy Friday and Happy Weekend to you! ~ Gershon

October 13, 2022 at 8:40 PM

I'll take the last one, please!

October 13, 2022 at 8:56 PM

Wise choice there, Becky! Tee-hee

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