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Down With the Sunset

I'm sure time slowed
Because to me it stopped
The fiery colored sky
Was gentle to the rising night
Even gentler to me
It had no reason to be
But like lovers it treated me
My eyes followed the flow
Of the waves as they come and go
God bless where the water kissed my toes
My sins must have been forgiven then
Because of the peace I felt
I had wanted to jump in
Not to drown, I could swim
But I wanted to lose my breath
To catch it again
A rebirth at sunset

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 4/28/2020 6:13:00 AM
That was a beautiful poem!! I to find my peace when I'm near water. Congrats on your placement :)
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Shagesa Mattheeuw
Date: 6/3/2020 9:46:00 AM
Thank you so much for liking my poem. And I'm happy we can relate to one another. Love xoxo :)
Date: 4/27/2020 5:11:00 PM
Your profound connection with nature is felt in this amazing poem Shagesa! Congratulations on your podium win! Blessings xxoo
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Shagesa Mattheeuw
Date: 6/3/2020 9:32:00 AM
Thank you. I really appreciate your words. It means a lot to me when my poem can touch the reader. To me that's the greatest praise. Blessings xoxoxo

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