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Down Where

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Down where wild violets dance
         To easterly breezes
                    And purple Irises erect, stiff, and chilled
              
See
   The dog walker shivers
                Wishing for an added layer
                            To top the corduroy pants still worn
                                      Even though spring green
                                                                   Is everywhere. 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kerr Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 2:09 AM
Sara, First the title has this subtle hint of what is to come. And what unfolds has awesome imagery and an enthralling conclusion.🌹🌸 Howard
Kendrick Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 5:02 AM
Why, thank you, Howard. I appreciate the nice review. Sara K. ⭐
One Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 6:16 AM
a lovely poem, Sara..
Kendrick Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 7:46 AM
SO, Thank you. I appreciate the visit. Sara K
Empress Avatar
March 25, 2024 at 1:43 PM
How beautiful is this dear sara, so gorgeous, and the way youve arranged your lines is so creative too, so many lines stood out for me, especially “ Down where wild violets dance To easterly breezes And purple Irises erect, stiff, and chilled“ love that! So artistic. I hope you are doing well: sending you light always, pleasure always reading your work
Kendrick Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 7:46 AM
Why, thank you, IE. Things are okay. I have felt better but I was a lot younger. Sara K
Buhagiar Avatar
March 25, 2024 at 9:18 AM
This is truly a beautiful poem I like the structure and the imagery of such a walk on the green lawns.
Kendrick Avatar
March 25, 2024 at 10:56 AM
Why, thank you, Victor. Your visit is so delightful. Sara K
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