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This is a true story. I was dancing in between 4 casino machines for four hours, and my daughter did leave me. And I did....well, it is true. 

I could not stop playing four casino Quartermania machines in Vegas. Totally exasperated with me was my sixteen-year-old daughter, Mavis. At two a.m. I was dancing between them singing a song I made up. If anyone approached I gave them the stink eye and shook my coin cup. Mom, I am leaving! She finally said at a quarter until three. That was fine, okay, I threw her the keys. Quite all right by me. I was up in the win zone, I had made a hundred dollars or more. I was down to one quarter by ten minutes to four. I looked at that danged quarter, debating about what to do. I had not had wheels to return home since about three twenty-two. I finally decided on the phone call, but I was reluctant. I called husband Cleo. I asked in my sweetest, most charming voice, “Want to have breakfast at the Rio?”

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Date: 1/16/2022 10:07:00 AM
Another neat story in rhyme. Love it! If Mavis had hung around just a wee bit longer, she could have said, "I told you so!" Reminds me of my brother and me gambling on a Sunday afternoon in the Bahamas. He lost and was ready to go, while I was winning and...well, I gave in and quit when I was ahead.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/16/2022 4:38:00 PM
Quitting while you are ahead is difficult to do!

Book: Shattered Sighs