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Down the Sink

Answer this honestly am I losing it d'you think Sometimes it feels like I'm right on the brink Hanging on for dear life With the help of my wife If I'm still too late, I'll be heading down the sink

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Date: 2/16/2018 11:31:00 AM
Tom did a limerick... you are inspiring people Limmerjack!
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Date: 2/16/2018 9:02:00 AM
You sound perfectly fine to me Jack... Now stop being so melodramatic lol
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/16/2018 9:38:00 AM
Oops sorry... you're right! It's a fabulous world out there???
Date: 2/16/2018 9:02:00 AM
Jack is going a little doo lalli started acting all pally pally, told his wife he is crazy, asked her to have a baby. Shocked! She put him on a plane to Cali!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/16/2018 9:37:00 AM
Uh... no more babies! Done my tour of duty, thank you!!!!!
Date: 2/16/2018 8:08:00 AM
Sounds like you gotta very nice wife, keep hanging on.x :)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/16/2018 8:35:00 AM
PLEASE don't be a stranger... I need your love!!! xoxox
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/16/2018 8:33:00 AM
Yes AND lots of sweet peeps here in the Soup!!! Love, Happy Jack xox
Date: 2/16/2018 6:37:00 AM
Hang in there Jack, hold tight. Tom
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/16/2018 8:46:00 AM
Just thought you may have prematurely lost your hair!!! Happy Jack
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/16/2018 7:01:00 AM
Love you jack,but your 32 years too late haha.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/16/2018 6:43:00 AM
Some days eh... but you enjoy your 30th birthday Tom!!!!!!!

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