Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

Down the Sink

Answer this honestly am I losing it d'you think
Sometimes it feels like I'm right on the brink
Hanging on for dear life
With the help of my wife
If I'm still too late, I'll be heading down the sink

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Silent One February 16, 2018 at 11:31 AM Tom did a limerick... you are inspiring people Limmerjack!

Silent One February 16, 2018 at 9:02 AM You sound perfectly fine to me Jack... Now stop being so melodramatic lol Jack Ellison February 16, 2018 at 9:38 AM Oops sorry... you're right! It's a fabulous world out there???

Silent One February 16, 2018 at 9:02 AM Jack is going a little doo lalli started acting all pally pally, told his wife he is crazy, asked her to have a baby. Shocked! She put him on a plane to Cali! Jack Ellison February 16, 2018 at 9:37 AM Uh... no more babies! Done my tour of duty, thank you!!!!!

Tahira Parveen February 16, 2018 at 8:08 AM Sounds like you gotta very nice wife, keep hanging on.x :) Jack Ellison February 16, 2018 at 8:35 AM PLEASE don't be a stranger... I need your love!!! xoxox Jack Ellison February 16, 2018 at 8:33 AM Yes AND lots of sweet peeps here in the Soup!!! Love, Happy Jack xox

Tom Cunningham February 16, 2018 at 6:37 AM Hang in there Jack, hold tight. Tom Jack Ellison February 16, 2018 at 8:46 AM Just thought you may have prematurely lost your hair!!! Happy Jack Tom Cunningham February 16, 2018 at 7:01 AM Love you jack,but your 32 years too late haha. Jack Ellison February 16, 2018 at 6:43 AM Some days eh... but you enjoy your 30th birthday Tom!!!!!!!