Down the Road

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I looked at her across the years
      her graying tresses, winnowed tears
         and there amidst, my own dread fears
   that life might find her lacking -
her one true love
      long dust, thereof ...

I gazed on her thru ages, hence
      the care-worn furrows years dispense
         with Autumn's chill that ne'er relents
   ripe beauty, sweet and lasting -
the dreams, all missed
      should fates persist ...

I saw her through the eyes of change
      those things that time could rearrange
         but not a charm was lost or strange
   her smile still stole my breathing -
but would the years
      grant me, or tears?

I viewed her self, far down the road
      with languid limbs and stature bowed
         still, her allure and splendor flowed
   with grace God grants the angels -
an unknown art
   should I depart ...

I watched her growing old in dreams
      cool by the moon's much bluer beams
         and warmed by day, as day so deems
   but always there beside her -
that song, not sung
      should I die young ...

in all those years I watched her go
      from gold through silver, eyes aglow
         and prayed I'd see it all - just SO
   but fate can be quite cruel -
for death, you see
      took HER, not me ...

the story fate thus told ...
      she never WOULD ... grow old.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 6/3/2021 3:20:00 PM
This my dear friend, is absolutely a masterpiece. So much depth, truth, life, living, reality, heart, love, sadness and very much more in this new creation! Definitely a most beautiful and rare jewel! Truly a gift to any and all that read it my friend. A fav of my favs! God bless.
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Date: 6/3/2021 5:19:00 AM
Gregory, this poem should make all who read it reflect on the importance of THIS DAY....and its place in our lives. Great write...sorta a cold slap...and wake up call
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