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I looked at her across the years her graying tresses, winnowed tears and there amidst, my own dread fears that life might find her lacking - her one true love long dust, thereof ... I gazed on her thru ages, hence the care-worn furrows years dispense with Autumn's chill that ne'er relents ripe beauty, sweet and lasting - the dreams, all missed should fates persist ... I saw her through the eyes of change those things that time could rearrange but not a charm was lost or strange her smile still stole my breathing - but would the years grant me, or tears? I viewed her self, far down the road with languid limbs and stature bowed still, her allure and splendor flowed with grace God grants the angels - an unknown art should I depart ... I watched her growing old in dreams cool by the moon's much bluer beams and warmed by day, as day so deems but always there beside her - that song, not sung should I die young ... in all those years I watched her go from gold through silver, eyes aglow and prayed I'd see it all - just SO but fate can be quite cruel - for death, you see took HER, not me ... the story fate thus told ... she never WOULD ... grow old.

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Date: 6/3/2021 3:20:00 PM
This my dear friend, is absolutely a masterpiece. So much depth, truth, life, living, reality, heart, love, sadness and very much more in this new creation! Definitely a most beautiful and rare jewel! Truly a gift to any and all that read it my friend. A fav of my favs! God bless.
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Date: 6/3/2021 5:19:00 AM
Gregory, this poem should make all who read it reflect on the importance of THIS DAY....and its place in our lives. Great write...sorta a cold slap...and wake up call
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