Down the Glen I Look By, Olive Eloisa Guillermo and James Fraser

From my window, down the Glen I look Amidst forested slopes, a stretch of water lies Seeing it once can leave the viewer hooked I now know why it's hard to bid goodbye Wandering far, limpid blue loch says hello It's sublime beauty seizes my leisure walk Alongside whisky coloured grass that grows Teeming trees, as the scene greets me in flock Candy fluffy clouds, glide above her waters blue Caressing cliffs, shading all for free Bluebells scents satiates my sense so true It's crystalline fluid beckons me to spree Whether one is local, or a holiday tourist The loch freezes the eye so one can't resist . Written by, Olive Eloisa Giullermo & James Fraser

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/13/2014 12:23:00 PM
Only now just found this gem! A truly fine collaboration! Bravo!!
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James Fraser
Date: 9/13/2014 3:50:00 PM
Robert, Olive is a joy to write with. We love the differences, the meaning, the reasoning, the happenings, and we get there. We do hope to continue this, for learning experiences, and that's what writing is all about. May I say, many thanks for all your wonderful comments, James :)
Date: 9/11/2014 11:11:00 AM
:) thank you James for another collaboration..:) I appreciate it..:) God bless us all..:)
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James Fraser
Date: 9/13/2014 10:50:00 AM
It's a pleasure Olive, and we'll continue to do so, James :)
Date: 9/11/2014 3:21:00 AM
whooo.. great team-up of a prince and a lady... fantabulous!.. huggs
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James Fraser
Date: 9/13/2014 11:31:00 AM
Thanks Princess, it's a joy and pleasure to write with Olive, and we mean to carry on, James ((( hugs )))
Date: 9/10/2014 4:03:00 PM
A beautiful sight..you two are fantastic..hugs
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James Fraser
Date: 9/13/2014 11:26:00 AM
Thanks kindly Tim, it's been a joy to write with Olive, James :)
Date: 9/10/2014 3:57:00 PM
simply stunning!!!!!!! Incredible imagery - i love it :-) hugs Jan xx
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James Fraser
Date: 9/13/2014 10:51:00 AM
Thank you kindly Jan, we're hopefully going to write more, it's good fun, James :) xx
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