Down the Glen I Look By, Olive Eloisa Guillermo and James Fraser

From my window, down the Glen I look Amidst forested slopes, a stretch of water lies Seeing it once can leave the viewer hooked I now know why it's hard to bid goodbye Wandering far, limpid blue loch says hello It's sublime beauty seizes my leisure walk Alongside whisky coloured grass that grows Teeming trees, as the scene greets me in flock Candy fluffy clouds, glide above her waters blue Caressing cliffs, shading all for free Bluebells scents satiates my sense so true It's crystalline fluid beckons me to spree Whether one is local, or a holiday tourist The loch freezes the eye so one can't resist . Written by, Olive Eloisa Giullermo & James Fraser
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lindley Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 12:23 PM
Only now just found this gem! A truly fine collaboration! Bravo!!
Fraser Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 3:50 PM
Robert, Olive is a joy to write with. We love the differences, the meaning, the reasoning, the happenings, and we get there. We do hope to continue this, for learning experiences, and that's what writing is all about. May I say, many thanks for all your wonderful comments, James :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 11:11 AM
:) thank you James for another collaboration..:) I appreciate it..:) God bless us all..:)
Fraser Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 10:50 AM
It's a pleasure Olive, and we'll continue to do so, James :)
Onclaud Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 3:21 AM
whooo.. great team-up of a prince and a lady... fantabulous!.. huggs
Fraser Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 11:31 AM
Thanks Princess, it's a joy and pleasure to write with Olive, and we mean to carry on, James ((( hugs )))
Smith Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 4:03 PM
A beautiful sight..you two are fantastic..hugs
Fraser Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 11:26 AM
Thanks kindly Tim, it's been a joy to write with Olive, James :)
Allison Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 3:57 PM
simply stunning!!!!!!! Incredible imagery - i love it :-) hugs Jan xx
Fraser Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 10:51 AM
Thank you kindly Jan, we're hopefully going to write more, it's good fun, James :) xx
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