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Down the Edge

Down The Edge


Monday, join workforce
Tuesday, feel the prime
Wednesday, get worn
Thursday in wrangle
Friday, take a leave

Saturday fun
Up to midnight
Visit old friends
Go to downtown

For each day
Prisoner
Of worldly

Forget
Someone

God

Copyright © Noel Villarosa | Year Posted 2010

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Skat A Date: 5/3/2015 9:31:00 PM NOEL, Congrats on your awesome win. Forever ~SKAT~ Login to Reply

Bill Frew Date: 3/27/2010 7:32:00 PM great write my friend,keep it up!Amen! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/14/2010 11:11:00 PM wow, this packs a powerful statement, VERY good, Noel! LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 3/10/2010 1:13:00 AM This is a wonderful reminder and clever idea for a diminished hexaverse--thank you for the reminder, Noel :) Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 3/3/2010 7:05:00 PM Surely it is, Noel. A diminished Hexaverse. Awesome job! GAPE, Moses Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 3/2/2010 4:05:00 PM I enjoyed reading your poetry today Noel. Thank you forall your kind comments. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Date: 3/2/2010 2:04:00 PM I think many do. I don't know where I would be without my faith. The ending packs a punch in this poem. Great way to share your message. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/2/2010 6:02:00 AM Excellent Noel..a beautiful breakdown of the week and the foundation of it all GOD.. thankxxx for this wonderful poem today..and for your special comments on my poetry always.. luv..Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 3/2/2010 5:13:00 AM great poem, you have a poetic sounding name, your parents are smart. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 3/2/2010 3:36:00 AM This is a challenging verse form, Noel, but you make a profound statement. Was not expecting the last three lines...perhaps I, too, was forgetting "Someone." Awesome! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Caroline Cécile Delacroix Date: 3/1/2010 10:55:00 PM Interesting write. Yes, God should be part of everyday of our life, not just on Sunday. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Best wishes, Caroline. Login to Reply