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Down the Edge

Down The Edge Monday, join workforce Tuesday, feel the prime Wednesday, get worn Thursday in wrangle Friday, take a leave Saturday fun Up to midnight Visit old friends Go to downtown For each day Prisoner Of worldly Forget Someone God

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Skat A

Date: 5/3/2015 9:31:00 PM

NOEL, Congrats on your awesome win. Forever ~SKAT~

Bill Frew

Date: 3/27/2010 7:32:00 PM

great write my friend,keep it up!Amen!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2010 11:11:00 PM

wow, this packs a powerful statement, VERY good, Noel! LUv, Andrea

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/10/2010 1:13:00 AM

This is a wonderful reminder and clever idea for a diminished hexaverse--thank you for the reminder, Noel :)

John Freeman

Date: 3/3/2010 7:05:00 PM

Surely it is, Noel. A diminished Hexaverse. Awesome job! GAPE, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/2/2010 4:05:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today Noel. Thank you forall your kind comments. Love, Carol

Date: 3/2/2010 2:04:00 PM

I think many do. I don't know where I would be without my faith. The ending packs a punch in this poem. Great way to share your message. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/2/2010 6:02:00 AM

Excellent Noel..a beautiful breakdown of the week and the foundation of it all GOD.. thankxxx for this wonderful poem today..and for your special comments on my poetry always.. luv..Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/2/2010 5:13:00 AM

great poem, you have a poetic sounding name, your parents are smart.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/2/2010 3:36:00 AM

This is a challenging verse form, Noel, but you make a profound statement. Was not expecting the last three lines...perhaps I, too, was forgetting "Someone." Awesome! Love, Carolyn

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 3/1/2010 10:55:00 PM

Interesting write. Yes, God should be part of everyday of our life, not just on Sunday. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Best wishes, Caroline.