Noel Villarosa Poet Diminished Hexaverse

Down the Edge

Down The Edge


Monday, join workforce
Tuesday, feel the prime
Wednesday, get worn
Thursday in wrangle
Friday, take a leave

Saturday fun
Up to midnight
Visit old friends
Go to downtown

For each day
Prisoner
Of worldly

Forget
Someone

God

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Skat A May 3, 2015 at 9:31 PM NOEL, Congrats on your awesome win. Forever ~SKAT~

Bill Frew March 27, 2010 at 7:32 PM great write my friend,keep it up!Amen!

Andrea Dietrich March 14, 2010 at 11:11 PM wow, this packs a powerful statement, VERY good, Noel! LUv, Andrea

Kabuteng P.Ink K. March 10, 2010 at 1:13 AM This is a wonderful reminder and clever idea for a diminished hexaverse--thank you for the reminder, Noel :)

John Freeman March 3, 2010 at 7:05 PM Surely it is, Noel. A diminished Hexaverse. Awesome job! GAPE, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown March 2, 2010 at 4:05 PM I enjoyed reading your poetry today Noel. Thank you forall your kind comments. Love, Carol

March 2, 2010 at 2:04 PM I think many do. I don't know where I would be without my faith. The ending packs a punch in this poem. Great way to share your message. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 2, 2010 at 6:02 AM Excellent Noel..a beautiful breakdown of the week and the foundation of it all GOD.. thankxxx for this wonderful poem today..and for your special comments on my poetry always.. luv..Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup

Doris Culverhouse March 2, 2010 at 5:13 AM great poem, you have a poetic sounding name, your parents are smart.

Carolyn Devonshire March 2, 2010 at 3:36 AM This is a challenging verse form, Noel, but you make a profound statement. Was not expecting the last three lines...perhaps I, too, was forgetting "Someone." Awesome! Love, Carolyn

Caroline Cécile Delacroix March 1, 2010 at 10:55 PM Interesting write. Yes, God should be part of everyday of our life, not just on Sunday. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Best wishes, Caroline.