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Down In the Valley

Down in the valley of memories I go searching for pieces of yesterdays past looking for you and your eyes all aglow down in the valley of grief fast in-toe August remembers the flowers of May September arrives and they all must go mother I miss you your smile and u'r ray August remembers, your liveliest day Daughters are prone to exist at pure will reaching for mothers and their special touch you are in heaven, and I need you still daughters are prone to love with- so much Down in the valley of memories I go looking for this and for that - yes I know you went up to live in God's Holy lair but I want you to know, that I care .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/9/2018 3:33:00 PM
Your beautiful poem really touched my heart. Missing mom.
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Date: 9/10/2018 9:09:00 AM
A beautiful touching write.
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Date: 9/1/2018 6:53:00 PM
Hello Pixie, love,love, love, this poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 8/27/2018 4:32:00 PM
This my friend is so very beautiful in its depths of expressing true and deepest love. Sorry for your great loss. You have crafted a magnificent and truly loving tribute to your mother with this exceptional poem.. A fav.. When lost our beloved mother, we were all at her beside...
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Date: 8/26/2018 12:59:00 PM
Heartfelt write my friend...I lost my mom last Oct...still hurts...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 8/26/2018 10:58:00 AM
Oh this is a sad poem.. I would be lost without my daughters... I am sure you daughter knows you care...
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Date: 8/25/2018 3:11:00 PM
Touching poem! My mother is still aroud - in fact I am going to a Broadway show with her tomorrow. I have memories of my father who died about ten years ago. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/25/2018 9:04:00 AM
This poem is beautiful and very touching, Pixie. Undoubtedly, your mother has known for a long time that you care! Hold on to those cherished memories. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 8/25/2018 8:25:00 AM
A tremendous loss and a beautiful dedication to your mom. So sorry you are going through this grief.
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Date: 8/25/2018 6:45:00 AM
Another heartfelt tribute you wrote..my thoughts and prayers are with you Pixie. I like the way the first and the 4th line repeat in part.
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