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Down in the meadows the sound of a calling lark is filling my ears with melodious sounds of beauty He heralds Autumn's arrival with his brave chirps and as his tinkling notes summon up the sunrise, he sings this mellifluous song of old for me ; The hour changes everything from hue to hue as I sit on that log that once held our beating hearts; As a butterfly lands on a maple tree I am suddenly reminded, of your Autumn gait; I could almost see your face again as each hour melts into a contemplative musing. There in the cross horizon of that beautiful meadow, the lark quietly flies away leaving me with indescribable thoughts of you. December 22, 2022 Sponsor Eve Roper Contest Name Still-Life Autumn Scene

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Date: 2/3/2024 7:29:00 AM
Rose, I found this little gem tucked away - and so glad I did. Lovely. We should together together these related rhymes into a compilation of some sort!
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Date: 2/3/2024 7:30:00 AM
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Date: 12/29/2022 9:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Down In The Meadows" is a lovely write/picture. I would love to be at your lake. Have a Blessed/Healthy/Great New Year 2023............
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Date: 12/28/2022 9:18:00 PM
Great work as usual. I am always inspired by your works. Congratulations!
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/28/2022 9:45:00 PM
Thank you Chris, your support is wonderful, glad you enjoyed it
Date: 12/28/2022 5:54:00 PM
Mystic, you set a wonderful scene and walked me there. Congratulations on your win. Many blessings to you
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/28/2022 9:45:00 PM
Thank you Eve I am honored that your loved it :)
Date: 12/23/2022 5:19:00 AM
Ruminating in wonderful memories--enjoyed the images you portray and emotions you convey, Vienna.
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Date: 12/23/2022 4:30:00 AM
This is so sweet and tender. I love this! "The hour changes everything from hue to hue as I sit on that log that once held our beating hearts;". I am breathless! A fave for me. Blessings dear friend. ^___^ Happy New Year ahead.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/23/2022 5:18:00 AM
My heart is grateful
Date: 12/22/2022 9:09:00 PM
"The hour changes everything from hue to hue as I sit on that log that once held our beating hearts;" -- Absolutely beautiful! Perfect!
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/23/2022 3:40:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by Joe, hope you have a Merry Christmas filled with love and peace :)

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