Down In the Meadows

Down in the meadows the sound of a calling lark 
is filling my ears with melodious sounds of beauty 
He heralds Autumn's arrival with his brave chirps   
and as his tinkling notes summon up the sunrise, 
he sings this mellifluous song of old for me ; 

The hour changes everything from hue to hue   
as I sit on that log that once held our beating hearts;
 
As a butterfly lands on a maple tree I am suddenly 
reminded, of your Autumn gait;  
I could almost see your face again
as each hour melts into a contemplative musing. 

There in the cross horizon of that beautiful meadow,
the lark quietly flies away leaving me with
indescribable thoughts of you. 

December 22, 2022 
Sponsor	Eve Roper
Contest Name	Still-Life Autumn Scene
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Scott Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 7:29 AM
Rose, I found this little gem tucked away - and so glad I did. Lovely. We should together together these related rhymes into a compilation of some sort!
Scott Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 7:30 AM
Ref: https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/meadow_-_100_best_new_poems_1617427
Goldsmith Avatar
December 29, 2022 at 9:18 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Down In The Meadows" is a lovely write/picture. I would love to be at your lake. Have a Blessed/Healthy/Great New Year 2023............
Alex Avatar
December 28, 2022 at 9:18 PM
Great work as usual. I am always inspired by your works. Congratulations!
Rose  Avatar
December 28, 2022 at 9:45 PM
Thank you Chris, your support is wonderful, glad you enjoyed it
Roper Avatar
December 28, 2022 at 5:54 PM
Mystic, you set a wonderful scene and walked me there. Congratulations on your win. Many blessings to you
Rose  Avatar
December 28, 2022 at 9:45 PM
Thank you Eve I am honored that your loved it :)
Pandit Avatar
December 23, 2022 at 5:19 AM
Ruminating in wonderful memories--enjoyed the images you portray and emotions you convey, Vienna.
Brul Avatar
December 23, 2022 at 4:30 AM
This is so sweet and tender. I love this! "The hour changes everything from hue to hue as I sit on that log that once held our beating hearts;". I am breathless! A fave for me. Blessings dear friend. ^___^ Happy New Year ahead.
Rose  Avatar
December 23, 2022 at 5:18 AM
My heart is grateful
DiMino Avatar
December 22, 2022 at 9:09 PM
"The hour changes everything from hue to hue as I sit on that log that once held our beating hearts;" -- Absolutely beautiful! Perfect!
Rose  Avatar
December 23, 2022 at 3:40 AM
Thank you for stopping by Joe, hope you have a Merry Christmas filled with love and peace :)
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