Down At the Hardware Store

Flapping in the wind A sign hangs near the front door "LEAF BLOWERS ON SALE"

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Date: 9/2/2009 2:17:00 AM

Amazing, love your style and simplity of your observant eyes...Raul

Date: 8/20/2009 9:52:00 AM

Your haiku's are top quality diamonds......great J.O.B.

Date: 8/18/2009 3:24:00 PM

Very cute, thanks for your comments on my work. We have the worst wind lately, it doesn't help to rake leaves in that kind of wind.

Date: 8/18/2009 9:39:00 AM

your eye is certainly-IN , Carrie . Over here , that comes free : it's called an Autumn gale !!!

Date: 8/18/2009 8:30:00 AM

Thank you Carrie...I will keep you posted on the book.

Date: 8/18/2009 7:38:00 AM

NICE.... Even though seventeen syllables is all a Haiku comes with, it is surprisingly difficult.... Wonderful write....:JP]

Date: 8/18/2009 7:14:00 AM

Yes, this is definetly talking about winter without showing it..well done my smarty friend..