Down At the Hardware Store

Flapping in the wind
   A sign hangs near the front door
        "LEAF BLOWERS ON SALE"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Moreno Avatar
September 2, 2009 at 2:17 AM
Amazing, love your style and simplity of your observant eyes...Raul
Lopez Avatar
August 20, 2009 at 9:52 AM
Your haiku's are top quality diamonds......great J.O.B.
Culverhouse Avatar
August 18, 2009 at 3:24 PM
Very cute, thanks for your comments on my work. We have the worst wind lately, it doesn't help to rake leaves in that kind of wind.
Kelly Avatar
August 18, 2009 at 9:39 AM
your eye is certainly-IN , Carrie . Over here , that comes free : it's called an Autumn gale !!!
Higgins Avatar
August 18, 2009 at 8:30 AM
Thank you Carrie...I will keep you posted on the book.
Pickett Avatar
August 18, 2009 at 7:38 AM
NICE.... Even though seventeen syllables is all a Haiku comes with, it is surprisingly difficult.... Wonderful write....:JP]
Higgins Avatar
August 18, 2009 at 7:14 AM
Yes, this is definetly talking about winter without showing it..well done my smarty friend..
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