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Down a Street I Walked

When i was young I had many dreams Of young boys quests And nightmare streams The dream of the shed I have written about But it's the other nightmare That made me shout Down a street i would walk In my hometown As i viewed the sky A plane came down It crashed in the canal Leaving debris strewn Bodies lie dotted Families in ruin I stand and stare At the plume's of smoke I'm half a mile away But still i choke Sirens all around As the screamers scream All of a sudden I'm out of this dream I sit up in bed Drenched and cold Shivering and lonely With no one to hold I fall back to sleep My mind in dread I count, one, two three As they line up the dead In the morning i awake To this recurring dream Or is it a nightmare i keep having In panic deep scream http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/me.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/7/2009 5:33:00 AM
Very intense and vivid write. I believe there are a lot of people that have recurring dreams. I do not mind the recurring dreams it's the recurring nightmares that causes the problems your last stanza captures so well.
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Date: 10/30/2009 3:50:00 PM
Very impressive write. There was a crash in Scotland at one time correct? I live where there is like a roadway for aircraft from the Atlanta and Jacksonville airports. The thought has crossed my mind about a crash. Try not to give it thought. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/30/2009 6:07:00 AM
Intense and gripping piece. I have had a few nightmares that, upon waking, I was truely shaken, because it felt so real. Great flow and vivid imagery in this Rhyme, James! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/29/2009 5:56:00 PM
WOH....IT'S A NIGHTMARE!
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Date: 10/29/2009 4:36:00 PM
Horrible thoughts, images, dreams can reflect the current turmoil in the world, as this one surely does. Quiet frightening when there seems we have no control over it...well done Highlander! ~Tru~
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Date: 10/29/2009 1:42:00 PM
this left me in sorta a state of shock. i'd hate to have a dream like that. especially if it reaccurs. ------Ell
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