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no words are spoken just a nuzzle to the cheek cats know when you're sad

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2016 7:52:00 PM

oh, I really love this, Viv. We had a cat a long time ago that just seemed so in synche with my son and he would nuzzle my son's cheek this way. Soupmail.

Viv Wigley
Date: 10/9/2016 1:22:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. I nuzzle my Janet's cheek when she's sad. Well, it's more of a slobber. She's never impressed... Viv x

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/8/2016 1:01:00 PM

This is so true !! And same with our dogs...they sense our emotions, and it seems they are trying to reach out and tell us it's going to be okay. Sweet senryu this is!! PS.......thanks so very much Viv, for the challenge and the placement in your "body parts" contest! That was a fun one to write....and stretch the imagination !! Thank you!

Viv Wigley
Date: 10/9/2016 1:22:00 AM

Thanks, Carrie, mucho appreciato, Viv x

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/4/2016 10:30:00 AM

I think it's just animals in general, Mr Viv. So sorry you are sad.

Viv Wigley
Date: 10/5/2016 11:49:00 PM

Don't worry, Daniel, just one of those transitory things when one feels a little under the weather. Thanks for your concern and visit. Regards, Viv

David Smith

Date: 10/4/2016 6:10:00 AM

Indeed. Some things are true beyond question. No hairs for lawyers to split in this one. You have outdone yourself in only three lines Viv. Regards David.

Viv Wigley
Date: 10/5/2016 11:49:00 PM

Thanks David, glad you enjoyed. Regards, Viv

Jan Allison

Date: 10/4/2016 2:02:00 AM

Oh bless Celeste - this is so true ... oh Mr Viv I hope you are ok:-( hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley
Date: 10/5/2016 11:50:00 PM

Hi Jan, my jan has been through a rough patch, sometimes stuff just gets on top of one. I'm out the other side now :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/3/2016 11:49:00 PM

Awwwwww....how sweet. Yes, animals are so receptive, Viv. Lovely little senryu here.

Viv Wigley
Date: 10/5/2016 11:50:00 PM

Thanks Eileen, they know more than they let on, eh? Viv x