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Life moves on and I stand still So many promises I need to fulfill Am I happy I don't know Round in circles here I go It's like crawling slowly up a hill

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/2/2015 6:02:00 PM
A good poem on life, I think we all feel this way at one time or another, Shane.
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Shane Cooper
Date: 3/3/2015 9:52:00 AM
Thank you Andrea for stopping in. I suppose we do. Love Shane xxx
Date: 2/28/2015 8:05:00 AM
- Always look forward ...... when the bottom is reached .... there is only one choice .... upward !!!!! - Well done limerick, Shane !!! - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Shane Cooper
Date: 2/28/2015 11:48:00 PM
Thank you Anne -Lise you also have a lovely weekend my dear friend. You are not correct about the number of choices when you hit bottom though. Love Shane xxx
Date: 2/27/2015 8:23:00 PM
A searching write that finds strong support from many friends. I don't have depression, but know some who suffer from this. It would be fun to find or know of cure that might help everyone! Keep well, stay safe! Mikki
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Shane Cooper
Date: 2/27/2015 11:37:00 PM
Hi Mikki, for me unlike Mike I find that being alone seems to amplify the deppression, my answer has been in writing and the friendship of loving people like yourself. Love Shane xxx
Date: 2/27/2015 12:44:00 PM
Oddly enough, my facebook status poem today was about going in circles. Shane if you are on facebook, come find us, there is tons of soupers there. :) we can all run in circles together
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Shane Cooper
Date: 2/27/2015 11:57:00 PM
I have read your poem and a lot of others that you have on your page, all wonderful, so I will take you up on your offer and climb on the merry-go-round with you.
Date: 2/27/2015 11:03:00 AM
Shane, I'll climb the hill with you...I'll keep you company. I fight depression too. Lovely write....Take courage. We're in this together. Hugs
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Shane Cooper
Date: 2/28/2015 12:00:00 AM
My Enchantress one could not ask for a more beautiful companion. I thank you from the bottom of my heart for the loving friendship that you share with me, you are my "angel in disguise ". Love Shane xxx
Date: 2/27/2015 6:14:00 AM
Know the feeling my friend especially the final line - but I am thankfully not depressed :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Shane Cooper
Date: 2/28/2015 12:06:00 AM
My dearest Jan thank you for looking at my poem, I know of all the troubles and pain you are facing and I know that the hill looks very high from where you stand but I also know that you have a resiliance inside of you that will get you over the top. You were my first friend on soup and are my dearest. Take care of yourself, I know next week will be hard. Love Shane xxx