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Doves Don'T Cry

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The understanding that we thrive off of interaction, socialization, need and lust, and animals such as doves love so effortlessly. I tried to entwine the two loves, and break them apart in the beautiful duality of both.
My words are the titles to The stories my lips will tell The dew that settles gently Between my hand and your cheek When we two parted, in death Hands parted for the first time My gentle fingers tracing Turned to wings but kept embracing The final door we walked through, On the other side we flew Twisting through the vines and leaves The love of doves transcends trees Once a human serenade, My attraction turned instinct I needn't hands or words, too, My heart, soar the skies with you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/1/2018 11:49:00 PM
Instinctive love it is, the purest among all...
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Date: 8/1/2018 6:57:00 AM
I really enjoyed this Andrew, thank you for sharing :) x
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Date: 7/31/2018 6:06:00 PM
very nice
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Date: 7/23/2018 10:24:00 PM
You did a lovely job of combining the two :)...so hard to lose loved ones, but a little easier if you believe you will see them again...love your last line Andrew...have a great day :)
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Date: 7/23/2018 6:29:00 PM
Its Beautiful ??
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Date: 7/9/2018 6:11:00 PM
Hi Andrew.. Another day, another airport. So how do I fight the long sit and wait? Your incredible write of course! You made my delay sing with your creativity!! Come see me if you get a chance.. I'm releasing a secret!
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