William Kelii Kekaula Poet Haiku

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Douglas

*Image of Best Nature Wind by Gfycat.

douglas

patriarch skies prayed
volcanic aerosols sprayed
uke strummed hula swayed

2020 July 26
*1st Place*
STRAND completely new (14)any theme any form
~~Brian Strand: Judged 2020 July 28

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Brenda Chiri August 1, 2020 at 3:56 PM Congrats on your win my friend!;) William Kelii Kekaula August 1, 2020 at 5:13 PM Many thanks, Brenda, stay safe my friend, Aloha! William

Janice Canerdy July 29, 2020 at 5:34 AM Great haiku, William. CONGRATS on your well-deserved win! Janice William Kelii Kekaula July 29, 2020 at 9:27 AM I am grateful, Janice, glad you liked it my friend -- Aloha~@William

Anisha Dutta July 29, 2020 at 4:38 AM AMAZING! Beautiful rhyming Haiku with excellent photo. Blessings. BIG CONGRATS William Kelii Kekaula July 29, 2020 at 9:25 AM I am appreciative of your kindness, Anisha, truly my friend -- Aloha~@William

Aditi Mishra July 29, 2020 at 12:12 AM A rhyming Haiku with such a vibrant theme! You are a talented poet William. Congratulations on your win :) William Kelii Kekaula July 29, 2020 at 12:19 AM Flushed am I, Aditi, many thanks for your time and obervances, my friend -- Aloha~@William

Jeanne Mcgee July 28, 2020 at 11:42 PM See, this is a win! Happy for your success William! William Kelii Kekaula July 28, 2020 at 11:44 PM Lol, thanks again, Jeanne -- Aloha~@William

Andrea Dietrich July 26, 2020 at 8:30 PM love the rhyming in this and the awesome picture. Hope you are ok!! William Kelii Kekaula July 26, 2020 at 8:38 PM My house spared--bounced off our Big Island, and slamming the leeward sides of Maui, Oahu and maybe all of Kauai by now--thanks Andrea, take care -- Aloha~@William

Jeanne Mcgee July 26, 2020 at 1:38 PM Oh, this is a win! Just love it so much. :D William Kelii Kekaula July 26, 2020 at 2:01 PM Thanks for the encouragement, Jeanne, truly -- Aloha~@William