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*Image of Best Nature Wind by Gfycat. douglas patriarch skies prayed volcanic aerosols sprayed uke strummed hula swayed 2020 July 26 *1st Place* STRAND completely new (14)any theme any form ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2020 July 28

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Brenda Chiri

Date: 8/1/2020 3:56:00 PM

Congrats on your win my friend!;)

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/1/2020 5:13:00 PM

Many thanks, Brenda, stay safe my friend, Aloha! William

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/29/2020 5:34:00 AM

Great haiku, William. CONGRATS on your well-deserved win! Janice

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/29/2020 9:27:00 AM

I am grateful, Janice, glad you liked it my friend -- Aloha~@William

Anisha Dutta

Date: 7/29/2020 4:38:00 AM

AMAZING! Beautiful rhyming Haiku with excellent photo. Blessings. BIG CONGRATS

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/29/2020 9:25:00 AM

I am appreciative of your kindness, Anisha, truly my friend -- Aloha~@William

Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/29/2020 12:12:00 AM

A rhyming Haiku with such a vibrant theme! You are a talented poet William. Congratulations on your win :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/29/2020 12:19:00 AM

Flushed am I, Aditi, many thanks for your time and obervances, my friend -- Aloha~@William

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 7/28/2020 11:42:00 PM

See, this is a win! Happy for your success William!

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/28/2020 11:44:00 PM

Lol, thanks again, Jeanne -- Aloha~@William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2020 8:30:00 PM

love the rhyming in this and the awesome picture. Hope you are ok!!

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/26/2020 8:38:00 PM

My house spared--bounced off our Big Island, and slamming the leeward sides of Maui, Oahu and maybe all of Kauai by now--thanks Andrea, take care -- Aloha~@William

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 7/26/2020 1:38:00 PM

Oh, this is a win! Just love it so much. :D

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/26/2020 2:01:00 PM

Thanks for the encouragement, Jeanne, truly -- Aloha~@William