Doubt Through All Senses

Doubt wraps me in a fabric 
     of uncoated leaves
on this near treacherous eve
 as my pillow rests beneath cloudbursts: 

I feel distanced from the elements of earth
       while stars blink dimly 
   these hands cannot reach.. 
   Will forbearance come for me ; 
           be the thread binding me until
    wind- washed air cuddles 
            my arms through mist 
  of an incandescent dew ,

 If only to  savor that resurrected light
       in glum hours-- cycle after cycle-- 
    and await dawn's birthing 
          from night's roaring, thunderous  tremor:
I listen fiercely then calmly to tweets
     arising through trees' sway; a glance, a gaze
    tracing pulses of another cycle's turn:

   It is near July, my soul feeling somewhat
       ecstatic about summer's arrival-- its flavor
    squeezing the juice of wild abandon; 
                     as morning shimmers
    against my feeble breath, allowing
               this godly intervention of renewal 
oh so miraculous...my sense of doubt
           waning  waning  on   wraps of thin air.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Scragg Avatar
July 1, 2026 at 12:13 PM
This is another outside of the box entry Nette. I like the way you engage the Senses with the change of season and as the days are brighter, everything else feels brighter to, to the point where "doubt is waning." The repetition of waning is impactful, it feels as the air is lifted doubt away from you. A sombre start and encouraging finish. Love the transition. Thank you for offering your poem for the contest. :-D
Watts Avatar
July 1, 2026 at 3:12 PM
Hi Nette An insightful and interesting piem of doubting the senses only to find the way through eventually as nature also doesnt let us down A nice read And Congrats on your high placing Cheers Christine
Daniel Avatar
June 29, 2026 at 9:55 AM
Very nicely done, Nette:)
Hind Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 8:20 PM
gorgeous, Nette
Dietrich Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 7:48 PM
What a creative way to write for this contest, Nette. I really loved the part about July and squeezing the juice of wild abandon
Kendrick Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 4:14 AM
This one reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Sometimes we do have those wet pillows upon which to rest our weary heads but thank God, He is there for us. Sara K.
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