Doubt

If you’d lend me
Your soul
For just one day,
Could you live
Without any feelings?


© 2009 Stefania Carmen Misaila
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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June 10, 2009 at 6:03 AM
no......assuming the soul is a real concept? I do. Light & Love
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June 1, 2009 at 4:18 PM
This probably would be best catagorized as free verse. Haiku are usually three line poems using images instead of feelings. I like the question at the end of this poem. I see you recently joined Poetry Soup. Welcome! I hope you are enjoying your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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June 1, 2009 at 10:54 AM
Stephanie, i like the meaning in this poem, i have sent you soup mail regarding Haiku>James
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