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Double Minded

Double minded


Indecisiveness,
Life seems a double edged sword,
You die either way !



August 13th, 2014
Contest- any poem under 5 lines contest #2
Sponsor- PD A

Ranked 6th

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Connie Marcum Wong

September 5, 2014 at 1:00 PM

I love how you ended this winning poem Dr. Upma. Congratulations!

Jan Allison

September 4, 2014 at 12:54 PM

very true! Great win hugs Jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

September 4, 2014 at 7:16 AM

Interesting thought, congrats. Dr. Upma

Poet Destroyer A

September 3, 2014 at 10:38 PM

Dr Upma, Congratulations, on your win:) Stop by and enjoy my blog, "Edgar Allan Poe" if you'd like or have time. Always ~LINDA~

Andrea Dietrich

August 15, 2014 at 1:39 AM

Yes, you sure do!!

Sara Kendrick

August 14, 2014 at 2:13 PM

Death comes to us all for sure..Enjoyed reading your thoughts captured in poetic expression..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

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August 14, 2014 at 9:03 AM

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

August 14, 2014 at 9:34 AM

Thank you my true friend ! Will surely do editing n go thru info today ! U r so very kind to me, thnx for ur valuable time Debbie!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

August 14, 2014 at 9:33 AM

Thank you my true friend ! Will surely do editing n go thru info today ! U r so very kind to me, thnx for ur valuable time Debbie!