Double J - Just Jetsam

Marred and minced remnants pile high in a storm’s swarm
Yesterdays, hardened-soft, surface where sea’s warm…

Flotsam found, lays tales around, in frayed traces
Another shattered shell whimpers of graces
vying with the sea-swept sands: gloss embossed fades…
Ocean’s dead! These are castaways of Hades, 
rid of depth, stranded upon the dry shallow
Interred where the sun bleaches out the shadows
till whitened ivory fills cavern’s echo:
enmeshed lime, crunching upon errors callow

Jazz died - June’s sun sank into august abyss…
Undertow currents ceased their torments of bliss
Nipped life, silenced like frothing foam vacuum-sealed,
kept smothered in an opaque ocean congealed…

Yard junked, Neptune’s home’s now a derelict mess
and yet he clings to the crap amassed, crownless
Right always, up to the end --------- that no return.
Death will erase the un-sunk bones when they burn

(10/3/2019: '90 Sea Ray DA 350; Discovery Park; ‘my favorite junkyard’)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Anaya Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 12:19 PM
Hello Susan, the imagery of you collecting driftwood amongst the waste and debris is sad and disturbing. Shame on them. We need Heal The Bay and others more than ever! I am glad you shared these junkyard interpretations love that! on Jazz—Jazz with Reggae an infused treat ~ Evelyn J Buehler ~ her poem “Almost Home” 8/12/22 turned me on to it! ~I Am Anaya
Woodrow Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 12:52 PM
Hi Anaya…thank you. Yes, it’s saddening how the ocean is so full of trash… I like reggae but Jazz in this write was an old friend’s nickname and she passed away shortly before i wrote the poem…I’ll check out Evelyn’s write :)
Sambourne Avatar
March 9, 2021 at 6:40 AM
Such a remarkable poem. Memorable lines like "...where the sun bleaches out the shadows." Our oceans are indeed junkyards particularly with plastic waste. A superb write. Challenging. Best wishes, Brian
Woodrow Avatar
March 9, 2021 at 7:43 AM
thank you...true, it is saddening now to see more and more plastic when I go collecting shells and driftwood :)
Gauthier Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 8:23 AM
Congrats on your top win, Susan. Welcome to PoetrySoup.
Woodrow Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 4:20 PM
Thanks Line :)
Green Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 8:23 AM
Very creative and quite the abstract piece but so well written and expressed. Congrats on your win!!!
Woodrow Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 10:00 AM
thank you, Chris. Glad you enjoyed it :)
Roper Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 7:55 PM
Congratulations on your win, Susan, in My Favorite Junkyard. Hugs Eve
Woodrow Avatar
November 3, 2019 at 2:06 AM
thank you Eve, I am quite a beachcomber! :)
Adams Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 4:16 PM
great write....congratulations on your top win! :)
Woodrow Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 5:24 PM
thank you :)
Scars Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 3:58 PM
Wow! Amazing sweet Susan! Congrats on your well deserved top win. :)-luloo
Woodrow Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 5:24 PM
thank you..congrats to you as well :)
Godwin Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 2:22 PM
Congratulations! Great imagery and depth. All the best ... CayCay
Woodrow Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 5:21 PM
thank you CayCay - the best to you too :)
Cornish Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 1:29 PM
Tasteful ambiguity presented in a truthfully painful & artful message - hits hard as it should. Exceptional poetry.
Woodrow Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 5:20 PM
I'm thrilled you liked it, Craig...I actually used advice from one of your blogs :)
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