Carrie Richards Poet Limerick

Double Duty Shredded Wheat

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These rectangles of wheat, that looks rather dashing
You smother with milk, then fun comes with smashing!
They give morning a boost !
Or can make a good roof….
In case of storm, when the house takes a thrashing!


I can stack them in rows on the roof, with my spouse
We will snack as we go, (a few tucked in my blouse)
Our breakfast a treat !
The morning complete !
The tummy is filled, plus a new roof on the house!!!

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Vince Suzadail Jr. February 27, 2012 at 4:29 PM They still taste better than they tar.

Russell Sivey October 9, 2011 at 12:15 AM Great write Carrie! I just love the fact you chose this cereal...There are so many of us that eat that cereal every morning, yum! Stupendous poem!!

Jl Sadberry October 8, 2011 at 8:27 PM Smile, *^_^* “Tis Something Sooo Very Beautiful About You My Dear Precious & Beautiful Carrie! *^_^* I Am Not Quite Certain As Unto Why But, Your Beauty Is Just Sooo Lovely &, I Loved Your Cute & Funny Poe Yet, How Many Would Give Their Heart, for A Bowl of Wheat to Feed The Ones They Love!? *^_^* Ahhh, Something About You That, Makes My Own Heart, Pitter Patter, My Dear Beautiful Carrie!” === My Love, Always, Jasper *

Nancy Jones October 8, 2011 at 7:40 PM would like to sup on yer roof! dig the write, Carrie. beauty eve and Namaste~N

Andrea Dietrich October 8, 2011 at 6:38 PM hahaha, comparing them to roofing material That is just how they taste to me! Great one, Carrie.