Double Disappointment

I woke up in rapture, when she started to sing.
Naughty whispers in my ears, “Someone’s coming”
My ecstatic view;
A child is due!
Then she continues, “My mother’s visiting”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 11, 2010 at 6:03 AM
Congratulations on going into the second round..Sara
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November 10, 2010 at 8:47 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Nitesh. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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September 9, 2010 at 3:52 PM
Congradulations on having your poem featured Nitesh, I am pleased to have read this, enjoyed, and best wishes to your upcoming days..P.D.
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September 7, 2010 at 10:15 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Nitesh. Love, Carol
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September 5, 2010 at 11:57 AM
Congrats Nitesh on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all this holiday weekend.. with luv..
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June 2, 2010 at 12:45 PM
You made me laugh with this one :) rgds WN
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May 26, 2010 at 5:40 AM
Got a good laugh from this one. Wonder how he felt about his mother in law visiting. Love, Carolyn
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