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Double Disappointment

I woke up in rapture, when she started to sing. Naughty whispers in my ears, “Someone’s coming” My ecstatic view; A child is due! Then she continues, “My mother’s visiting”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 11/11/2010 6:03:00 AM
Congratulations on going into the second round..Sara
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Date: 11/10/2010 8:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Nitesh. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/9/2010 3:52:00 PM
Congradulations on having your poem featured Nitesh, I am pleased to have read this, enjoyed, and best wishes to your upcoming days..P.D.
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Date: 9/7/2010 10:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Nitesh. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/5/2010 11:57:00 AM
Congrats Nitesh on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all this holiday weekend.. with luv..
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Date: 6/2/2010 12:45:00 PM
You made me laugh with this one :) rgds WN
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Date: 5/26/2010 5:40:00 AM
Got a good laugh from this one. Wonder how he felt about his mother in law visiting. Love, Carolyn
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