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Double Dip Dilemma

Children at the ice cream store, are staking claims with hungry eyes But all those choices, ....how to pick, while clutching dollars for their prize? On their tip-toes,...peeking in, frost on noses like cherry roses! Standing there in mute despair, like indecisive millionaires !! With fifty flavors waiting there, tempting them to choose a pair How to choose a double dip? Should they get the chocolate chip, strawberry or bubble gum? Praline cream or butter rum? All those flavors ...is there one, that satisfies a drooling tongue? Finally mommy has a plan... Tell the smiling ice cream man Two yummy ice creams......in the cones Two different pints to carry home!
_____________________________________________________________ 10/26/16 For "All This Melts In the Mouth" Contest--- Sponsor: Olive Eloisa Guillermo
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Gregory Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 7:45 PM
Nice I all but smell the bouquet Nicely done
Hay Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 3:36 PM
I love this one, made me smile, well done, warm regards, Laura.
A. Sharma Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 11:08 PM
Congrats on ur superb win with this awesome write Carrie!
Inman Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 11:01 PM
I like this kind of mom. Carrie, delightful write.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 8:20 PM
Carrie, I couldn't ignore or neglect to place this poem too, why? I so love the picture of those children, heehehe... and there comes the mom having a problem to satisfy her children's desires... =`) very cute!!! BIG CONGRATULATIONS!~Olive Eloisa =`)
Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 5:05 PM
Nice one, Carrie. Glad to finally see your winning entry!
Kendrick Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 3:35 PM
Ahh!! Melt in your mouth goodness!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
A  Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 2:57 PM
Carrie, congratulations. SKAT
Roper Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 12:46 PM
Wonderful write, Carrie, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Haight Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 10:39 AM
Very clever and cute, Carrie! Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra
Lane Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 8:42 AM
That was a smart mommy, and an excellent write, Carrie. Congratulations.
Godwin Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 11:52 AM
You are so right - I remember that once permission was given, I struggled to make the right and perfect decision - unlike healthy food in a restaurant. Very clever and, for me, nostalgic. CayCay
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October 26, 2015 at 11:00 PM
Carrie, A wonderful and fun poem to read. I remember the ice cream truck. As a child, i had a hard time picking just one flavor. Olive will love this poem, not only because it is sweet, but because it might melt with all the Xoolness before her contest is over. Enjoyed. LINDA
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