Dot To Dot

The nascent fiery dot in the sunburst dawning horizon spans the sapphire sky, driving the dazzling day on the transient transit. The spent sun sinks as the blazing golden point, the last flare gleams the end, completing the dot to dot connection in the lattice of time continuum. The disguised designer of destiny creates an intricate pattern with bewildered specks of being, getting joined in the journey to make the motif of existence. In the ordained matrix of my life, I consumed my time to connect the disparate dots of self, configuring the contours of me, waiting to conjoin the last dot. _______________ December 11, 2022 For Brian Strand's Contest No. 1180

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Date: 2/6/2023 8:50:00 AM
Dear Subimal, such creative expression! I adore how you connect the rising and setting sun - dot to dot. Everything in between is the "lattice of time continuum" with "bewildered specks of being, getting joined in the journey" and revealing "I consumed my time to connect/the disparate dots of self,/configuring the contours of me,/waiting to conjoin the last dot." Your thoughts "completing the dot to dot connection" so perfectly in your grand finale! Deep and rich poetry. Such a pleasure to read and ponder. Congratulations for your fine win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 2/4/2023 11:09:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great winning poem, Subimal :) - hugs
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Date: 2/4/2023 10:22:00 AM
A huge CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Subimal~~thought-provoking,vivid language! Janice
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