Dora's Cat

Dora's cat goes outside
On a chair she sits with pride
Enjoying her view of the birds
They are in the grass unstirred
Chirping happily is unheard
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Wilae Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 10:24 PM
Awwww...thank goodness kitty is too tranquil to chase after the tweeters. Short and very sweet!!!!! I love cats.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 11:34 AM
Hello Sona, I also like cats.The sunshine made the kitty tranquil. have a nice day my friend.
Berggren Avatar
July 12, 2017 at 11:13 PM
I'm glad the cat doesn't attack the birds. That would ruin the tranquility of it all.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 13, 2017 at 10:16 AM
This cat was too tired to chase the birds,after a good hour of playing with his owner.
Andresen Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 4:23 AM
- A sweet poem, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 8:50 PM
Hello Sunshine,thank you.It is almost bed time,so I will endmy comments to night. Hugs
Melugin Avatar
May 31, 2017 at 7:57 AM
Darlene . this is a darling of a poem. You captured, with your pen, stellar moments, that often are swept away, unnoticed. Creative, is an understatement. 7 My best to you, chuck
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 31, 2017 at 5:53 PM
Hello Chuch, nice to meet you. Thank you Chuck,Best wishes to you.
Callus Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 11:05 AM
How cute this is, Darlene; it reminds me of my cat Smokey! ~ Regards // paul
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 4:37 PM
Thank you Paul. I entered this poem for the contest. What breed was Smokey?
Raven Avatar
May 29, 2017 at 11:06 AM
Hi Darlene, a moment in the life, when peace and tranquility hold sway. Would that such moments could last and last. This is a little gem of a poem. Such a wonderful image to comprehend. The scene i picture so easily. I enjoyed the read Darlene. Hugs....Mike. XX
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 4:40 PM
Thank you Vladislay, I am so pleased that you enjoyed this poem Mike. Hugs and XX's
Thirtyseven Avatar
May 29, 2017 at 9:25 AM
That last line really makes it for me. Like that little twist.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 31, 2017 at 5:54 PM
Hello Scott,I like the last line to. Yes it has a little twist.
Wanter Avatar
May 28, 2017 at 9:45 AM
Sweet kitty - exercising restraint. Thank you for commenting on my poem.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 28, 2017 at 12:53 PM
Your welcome Sunlite Wanter. Thank you.
Ricci Avatar
May 28, 2017 at 7:19 AM
Good Morning Darlene. I hope this day finds you well. Bless Dora's car and the birds too. This entry is a little gem. You have managed to grace a beautiful and precious moment in time for the birds Dora's cat and us reader. Thank you for the beauty and the tranquility. Well done completely and entirely. Have a wonderful day.
Williams Avatar
May 26, 2017 at 7:02 AM
This is a real cute fun poem Darlene, really enjoyed it.....Maria
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 27, 2017 at 5:47 PM
Hello maria, nice to meet you.Thank you.
Dietrich Avatar
May 24, 2017 at 3:31 PM
Maybe you meant to say that you posted the same poem twice by mistake. I can see this poem appears twice on your list. Go to the left and click on Member area. Find the second poem which nobody has commented to yet and just click on the X next to it and it will be deleted. HOpe that helps!!
Dietrich Avatar
May 24, 2017 at 3:29 PM
Darlene. I do not think it is possible to enter a contest twice. The system won't allow you to do it! If it happens to anyone, it's a fluke. So regarding your message to me about that, don't sweat it. this one is a cute poem!
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 24, 2017 at 7:39 PM
Thank you for answering my question.
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