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Dora David

I thought I was dying But my mind was lying So I must stop worrying And I must stop crying I must start jumping with glory Because tomorrow they will all be sorry They will all be packed in a lorry And it will end like a fairy tale story They will all be far than the forestry And happily I will celebrate the victory Very soon everything will be history And this just a haunted piece of poetry

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Yuhi Musinga

Date: 10/2/2017 3:21:00 AM

Wow man, just wow!

Nadia September

Date: 10/1/2016 1:17:00 PM

Hey Johannes , That is one hell of a poems totally cool. Keep up the good work !

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/27/2016 10:01:00 PM

Johannes Paavo, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Paavo Johannes
Date: 7/28/2016 3:04:00 PM

Destroyer, I am already enjoying the friendly and supportive community. I enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read too. I like constructive criticism because it is the only way to improve on various aspects, not only in poetry, but in many tasks in life. I enjoyed reading some of your poems too and you are really good. Thank you.

Skat A

Date: 7/27/2016 3:41:00 PM

Johannes,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**

Paavo Johannes
Date: 7/27/2016 4:10:00 PM

Hey Skat, thanks. I am really happy to be a member of Poetry Soup and grateful to have a friend like you, who is willing to read and become familiar with my poems. I am an IT student at the University of Namibia and generally like writing. I am currently writing my first novel called "Dora David" and the poem I just uploaded are words of my main character Dora David. Will not finish typing if I continue... I am really grateful.