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Doppleganger

And Arthur sometimes often saw, A fella lonesome and for sure, Who could maybe misinform, His double maybe more. Becalmed, began to understrum, The reason for this meeting, He looked a little bit less young, “Probably needed to be hung, Yes that is what he’s needing.” The preacher scowling passed the plate, “give back the money that you stole, The devil will you incinerate, Perhaps we’ll save you soul” Strange talk in church he’s hearing, He grabbed the preacher, Christmas holt, To stop him interfering, And then he did the bolt, Rode off with Hasting Deering Would his double keep appearing? Don Johnson 4-jul-11 Matt Caliri contest Doppleganger

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Date: 7/9/2011 8:03:00 PM
Double trouble....my husband is a triplet and they used to play some pranks on those who did not know them....hehe
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Date: 7/4/2011 8:30:00 AM
Interesting write..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by ...Sara
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Date: 7/4/2011 8:24:00 AM
I like your style Don along with the lingo! wishing you good luck with this write. "on ya mate!" : )
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Date: 7/4/2011 5:39:00 AM
mystical with some spiritual touches, don... well-done with my winning wishes..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 7/4/2011 1:34:00 AM
I love the rhythm! Words--eloquent! One of the best! Thanks for the good read, Don!
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Date: 7/4/2011 12:21:00 AM
Good writer you are...I'm being Yoda today - Kyle
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