Dopamine Brawl

His psychosis created a fragment of hell.
An azure paradise annihilated of purpose
screamed in cacophony of mystic syllables,
and sensing  different times and places.
a shrivelled  illusion intruded his mind...
only to disappear suddenly in a sinkhole.
 
In waiting room of Doctors chamber,
he cried for help, but nobody listened. 
The ruckus of dysfunctional dopamine 
cut a vertical bevel in his horizontal thinking.
They said it decimated his culminating life
it now will  need a leverage of medication. 

A derelict dog runs frantically...  
after the family car speeding  for vacation.
He stretches his arms, "please take me along
in my resolution to fight this fatal brawl".



Dated 4th June 2019
Sponsor	Kai Michael Neumann
Contest   Eight Word Challenge
Write a poem that contains these eight words ...
psychosis, leverage,fragment,bevel
derelict,resolution,sinkhole,illusion
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 2/21/2020 5:12:00 PM
Congrats on your win!;)
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 2/21/2020 11:59:00 PM
Thanks dear friend
Date: 7/6/2019 10:51:00 PM
Excellent use of the required words, Debjani. You’ve woven them seamlessly into the fabric of your amazing poem. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/2/2019 4:43:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Debjani. Well done.
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Date: 7/2/2019 4:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest. I like the dog as the rescuer, where psychiatry might not heal. Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 6/4/2019 10:05:00 PM
Nicely done with this eight word challenge, Debjani!
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Date: 6/4/2019 6:33:00 PM
Good use of the eight words. Such a sad thing . What a great phrasing: The ruckus of dysfunctional dopamine
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