Get Your Premium Membership

Dopamine Brawl

His psychosis created a fragment of hell. An azure paradise annihilated of purpose screamed in cacophony of mystic syllables, and sensing different times and places. a shrivelled illusion intruded his mind... only to disappear suddenly in a sinkhole. In waiting room of Doctors chamber, he cried for help, but nobody listened. The ruckus of dysfunctional dopamine cut a vertical bevel in his horizontal thinking. They said it decimated his culminating life it now will need a leverage of medication. A derelict dog runs frantically... after the family car speeding for vacation. He stretches his arms, "please take me along in my resolution to fight this fatal brawl". Dated 4th June 2019 Sponsor Kai Michael Neumann Contest Eight Word Challenge Write a poem that contains these eight words ... psychosis, leverage,fragment,bevel derelict,resolution,sinkhole,illusion

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/21/2020 5:12:00 PM
Congrats on your win!;)
Login to Reply
Mitra Avatar
Debjani Mitra
Date: 2/21/2020 11:59:00 PM
Thanks dear friend
Date: 7/6/2019 10:51:00 PM
Excellent use of the required words, Debjani. You’ve woven them seamlessly into the fabric of your amazing poem. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Login to Reply
Date: 7/2/2019 4:43:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Debjani. Well done.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/2/2019 4:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest. I like the dog as the rescuer, where psychiatry might not heal. Kind wishes, Kai
Login to Reply
Date: 6/4/2019 10:05:00 PM
Nicely done with this eight word challenge, Debjani!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/4/2019 6:33:00 PM
Good use of the eight words. Such a sad thing . What a great phrasing: The ruckus of dysfunctional dopamine
Login to Reply