Doors to Dreams

I struck the ball, it hit a star How’d it ever reach that far ~ Doors to dreams, left ajar

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Bill Baker

Date: 7/19/2025 9:26:00 PM

Fun Monorhyme, gw. Leave that door ajar and we can all dream and go far. BB

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 7/14/2025 4:55:00 PM

almost magical in your delivery. Enjoyed!

David Crandall

Date: 7/14/2025 3:51:00 PM

This is a great one. Only three lines, but I think it's my favorite of yours that I read so far. Brilliant. I used to tell my son slightly exaggerated stories about how far this or that ballplayer hit a home run. It reminds me of those days.

John Lawless

Date: 7/14/2025 6:57:00 AM

you Chicago fans...that door is always left ajar at the all star break....