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Doors to Dreams

     I struck the ball, it hit a star

     How’d it ever reach that far

       ~ Doors to dreams, left ajar

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Bill Baker

July 19, 2025 at 9:26 PM

Fun Monorhyme, gw. Leave that door ajar and we can all dream and go far. BB

sara Etgen-Baker

July 14, 2025 at 4:55 PM

almost magical in your delivery. Enjoyed!

David Crandall

July 14, 2025 at 3:51 PM

This is a great one. Only three lines, but I think it's my favorite of yours that I read so far. Brilliant. I used to tell my son slightly exaggerated stories about how far this or that ballplayer hit a home run. It reminds me of those days.