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Doors Calling

Drops of hues on dews Your vibrant doors are in bloom Gone is all my gloom ###### It’s time to unlock Drop my time-stopping letters Sooner than later ###### Rain is at your door Moments won’t come back again Greet it in your veins ##### Wide eyes at the door I’ve to get down from the train To cave in still more… _________________________

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Charlie Smith

Date: 3/20/2016 9:31:00 AM

Congratulations, well done Probir

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/20/2016 11:03:00 AM

Thanks Charlie...

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/14/2016 6:23:00 PM

Hi Probir, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. I do love Haiku and here i have four in a row. Four well crafted Haiku to stir the imagination. Each holds its own vision but it seems that all together they make one whole vision. I enjoyed these Haiku Probir. They are worthy of a seven, each one, but i can give but one seven. They go into my faves my friend....Vlad.

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/14/2016 10:01:00 PM

Thank you so much Vlad. I am honoured that you enjoyed the Haiku.....

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/13/2016 10:41:00 AM

Probir, Congratulations on your win. Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Stop by my blog "Names on Poetry Soup" if you like. It would be nice to hear from you and all those who I honored with a placement. XOX ~LINDA~

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/13/2016 11:11:00 AM

Thank you *LINDA*

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 2/14/2016 10:08:00 PM

A superb SENRYU series my friend in strict 575 format. Marvelous wording and imagery. Well done indeed! Best wishes, Keith

Probir Gupta
Date: 2/15/2016 4:32:00 AM

Thank you...