Doors Calling

Drops of hues on dews
Your vibrant doors are in bloom
Gone is all my gloom

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It’s time to unlock
Drop my time-stopping letters
Sooner than later

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Rain is at your door
Moments won’t come back again
Greet it in your veins

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Wide eyes at the door
I’ve to get down from the train
To cave in still more…

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Smith Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 9:31 AM
Congratulations, well done Probir
Gupta Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 11:03 AM
Thanks Charlie...
Raven Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 6:23 PM
Hi Probir, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. I do love Haiku and here i have four in a row. Four well crafted Haiku to stir the imagination. Each holds its own vision but it seems that all together they make one whole vision. I enjoyed these Haiku Probir. They are worthy of a seven, each one, but i can give but one seven. They go into my faves my friend....Vlad.
Gupta Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 10:01 PM
Thank you so much Vlad. I am honoured that you enjoyed the Haiku.....
A   Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 10:41 AM
Probir, Congratulations on your win. Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Stop by my blog "Names on Poetry Soup" if you like. It would be nice to hear from you and all those who I honored with a placement. XOX ~LINDA~
Gupta Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 11:11 AM
Thank you *LINDA*
Bickerstaffe Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 10:08 PM
A superb SENRYU series my friend in strict 575 format. Marvelous wording and imagery. Well done indeed! Best wishes, Keith
Gupta Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 4:32 AM
Thank you...
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