Door

I was walking along a quiet shore

      When I came upon a floating door

      Filled with curiosity like the cat I too

      Opened the thing and then fell through

      Falling...Falling...Falling...Only to awake on the floor.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 23, 2010 at 10:35 AM
hahaha yiikes hope you didn't hit your head ;)! what a way to wake up!! nice limerick, Dan-- nikko :)
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