Doomed To Vanish

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What would deem biding our critical concern? What tolerably deep association would we learn? Is it fair to firmly assert we utterly understand? What has loomed and shielded stiff mend? Do we promptly make every second count? Is it sprung to say we are doomed to idly die to flout? Heed the placid quiddity we are endeavoring. It is drifting us by, oblivious of our lone value levering. Is it genuine that these requests typically exist? Because of the way that nobody can be sure? They overshadow you like a goliath can desist. It's unsatisfactory what the disposals efficiently are. The vista is sorrowful, and the future looks bleak. We expect a required course yet lack the will to seek. Written: December 12, 2021

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Lin Lane

Date: 12/14/2021 4:15:00 AM

Seek, we must. Lovely writing, Lasaad.

Valsa George

Date: 12/13/2021 8:38:00 PM

"The vista is sorrowful, and the future looks bleak. We expect a required course yet lack the will to seek". I do agree with you friend . Our future is bleak. Unless we chart the right course, we will be doomed. A grave warning !

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/13/2021 7:09:00 AM

Ignorance is the greatest foe of our soul that leads us to our condemnation, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Knowledge, on the other hand, may lead us to our salvation. Excellent writing! Blessings.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/13/2021 5:21:00 AM

So many quests to ponder--we don't understand it all. Yet, we must keep trying. I hear your warning, Lasaad.

Judy Ball

Date: 12/12/2021 11:00:00 PM

Another WoW for you here Lasaad. Well said. I agree with what Victor said here. If you know you are required to do something in order to receive your salvation but lack the will to seek out what God wants of you you are doomed. If you don't give much you won't receive much. Great write my friend. God Bless, JB

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/12/2021 10:48:00 PM

Life can be pitiful if we know we ae in the wrong and to not have the will to redeem ourselves.