Doomed To Catastrophe

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Her poor broken heart now lies in rubble. She done hooked up with another bad boy. Ignored warning, "keep away, he's trouble!" The womanizer played her like a toy. How funny, her name happens to be "Joy" Friends often wear disapproving faces, For she looks for love in the wrong places. Catastrophe dealt a withering blow; Her bleeding heart leaves obvious traces. A relationship doomed from the word "go" D Forms - Dizain - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance LaFrance Theme chosen: Doomed Syllables checked at howmanysyllables.com Date written: 02/08/2022

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/15/2022 11:04:00 AM

Edward, your words strike to the heart of brokenness that continues to repeat itself in relationships that strip away the dignity of a soul named "Joy!" Time to break that mold!! Well written. Congrats and high fives wrapped up in blessings my friend.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/15/2022 1:12:00 PM

Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback, congrats and high fives, Sam:-)

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 2/14/2022 6:55:00 PM

We see this all around, often. No one listens, Edward … the only hope for her is quick recovery from abandonment. Great write, enjoyed, congrats on your win!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/15/2022 1:13:00 PM

Thank you very much for the visit and wonderful feedback, Seeker:-) Most obliged.

Constance La France

Date: 2/14/2022 3:10:00 PM

Edward, congratulations on your Second Place win in my D Form-Dizain contest with your wonderful poem and I like your quote image too ~ Constance

Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/15/2022 1:11:00 PM

Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and my placement, Constance:-)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/8/2022 2:43:00 PM

Well done Edward in this hard (for me) to execute form. You give voice to travails of broken relationships. Some are attracted to trouble makers. What glitters isn't always gold. It was doomed from the start as you so well illustrate.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/8/2022 2:55:00 PM

"Some are attracted to trouble makers"...yep, some women love bad boys, it's rather unfortunate. Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and visit, Vijay:-)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/8/2022 2:19:00 PM

A situation you often hear about Edward, as the saying goes, love is blind. Tom

Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/8/2022 2:41:00 PM

True indeed, Tom! Thanks for dropping by, my friend.