Doomed Now

I learned Jason passed away
at four o’clock on the way.
My worries rushed to the fore hot,
doomed now, for he owed me a lot!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Williams Avatar
November 19, 2012 at 11:30 AM
Junate too late now...David
Ersal Avatar
November 19, 2012 at 1:06 PM
Really :)
O'Leary Avatar
November 19, 2012 at 11:21 AM
I gues this is kinda funny, in a morbid way... I like it! Terry (& thanks for your kind words)
Ersal Avatar
November 19, 2012 at 1:07 PM
It's kind of tragicomic. As for the words, You already deserve more than them :)
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