Doomed Filled Eyes

Today we sigh long
For tomorrow the skies fall
Hitting us to ground
Seemingly not making sounds
And away in tears we drown
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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May 24, 2010 at 2:55 PM
I Lied in my previous comment on this. Like is wrong. I love this, it does say alot in such few words. Its something I can easily relate to.
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April 8, 2009 at 11:37 AM
i like this nice job it says alot in such few word
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