Doomed: Drafts of the Contented

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Daily Joke: Man Dies and Appears at the Pearly Gates

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*Image of Pearly Gates by DJ. "The idea is to die young as late as possible," -- Mark Twain Doomed: Drafts of the Contented Unrestrained I thrive in absolution, Heroic of what my morrow may be, I rend the deception of temptation, Restrict evil to grasp control of me, Specific privacy hears my last plea, A one on one relationship with God, Pithily, pithily, I'd stand high, awed, I function nor oversees what await, Angelic advisors their staff and rod, Recruited table ere the Pearly Gate. 2022 January 31 D Forms - Dizain ~~Constance La France *HMS; 10x10=100 RhymeScheme; ababbccdcd

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Constance La France

Date: 2/14/2022 2:51:00 PM

Hilo, congratulations on your Second Place win in my D Form-Dizain contest with your wonderful poem and I love your quote too ~ Constance

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/1/2022 6:10:00 AM

Awesome write, William.

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/1/2022 6:17:00 AM

I'm honored, Vijay, Aloha!