William Kelii Kekaula Poet Dizain

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Doomed: Drafts of the Contented

*Image of Pearly Gates by DJ.
"The idea is to die young as late as possible," -- Mark Twain

Doomed: Drafts of the Contented

Unrestrained I thrive in absolution,
Heroic of what my morrow may be,
I rend the deception of temptation,
Restrict evil to grasp control of me,
Specific privacy hears my last plea,
A one on one relationship with God,
Pithily, pithily, I'd stand high, awed,
I function nor oversees what await,
Angelic advisors their staff and rod,
Recruited table ere the Pearly Gate.

2022 January 31
D Forms - Dizain
~~Constance La France

*HMS; 10x10=100
RhymeScheme; ababbccdcd

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Constance La France February 14, 2022 at 2:51 PM Hilo, congratulations on your Second Place win in my D Form-Dizain contest with your wonderful poem and I love your quote too ~ Constance

Vijay Pandit February 1, 2022 at 6:10 AM Awesome write, William. William Kelii Kekaula February 1, 2022 at 6:17 AM I'm honored, Vijay, Aloha!