Kahlani Steele Poet Alliteration

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DOOLEY'S DEVIL'S DELIGHT

Darling Dolly liked to dawdle
down past Dooley’s Deli.
Darling Dolly didn’t dabble 
in Dooley’s Devil’s Delight.
Devil’s Delight, a donut dessert,
didn’t do it for Dolly.
Darling Dolly didn’t delight 
in Dooley’s donut dessert.
So Darling Dolly dawdled home
without Dooley’s Devil’s Delight.

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Pivotal Poetry February 3, 2025 at 9:56 PM Fun to read, love it.

Terry Miller November 12, 2024 at 1:30 AM Brilliant alliteration, congratulations Kahlani Steele November 12, 2024 at 1:55 AM Thank you so much, Terry, for your kind words.

Maria Williams October 17, 2024 at 9:11 PM Sounds yummy - could it be she was gluten intolerant that's why she couldn't have the donuts? Lol. Maria Kahlani Steele October 17, 2024 at 10:33 PM Well, that would explain why the donut dessert didn't do it for Dolly! Nice observation.

Len Gasun October 14, 2024 at 12:31 AM Coming back to read after clicking your avatar on my poem and found this fantastic rhyme poem in alliterations. This is soo good and I'm sure children will love this as much as I do. Thanks for sharing and good luck my dear poet friend. Hugs Kahlani Steele October 14, 2024 at 4:23 AM Thank you, Len. I'm an early childhood teacher, but even big people are allowed to enjoy alliteration poetry!