Doofiness As a Spiritual Principle

My loving wife is a woman who’s just not inclined to flatter
Mine pointed out I’m not so serious about things that don’t matter
But I read between the lines of what she thought she meant
Her unintended words of praise, were actually heaven sent!

Plus, a golden opportunity that seemed just right
To ‘splain to the kiddos why I’m not so dang uptight:
“I apologize, I’m well aware, your dad is such an oddity
See, middle-aged energy is such a limited commodity

“If I expend my efforts worrying about everyone’s chit-chatter
Then I will not have said energy when it really matters!
So, do you think I’m such an unrelenting doofus at work?
Well, sometimes, but you can be darned sure I never shirk.

"And here’s the point that I hope all you kiddos apprehend
Someone who doesn’t like your happiness is hardly a good friend.
Just keep your eyes on the prize, who God made you to be
Grow your heart to love yourself; you can be truly free!”

4/27/16
© Thomas W. Quigley
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lindley Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 12:53 PM
Great message,smooth the flow and ending verses are true icing on the cake my friend.A7
Quigley Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 2:44 PM
Thanks, Robert!
Ashe Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 3:02 PM
I enjoy this entire piece and your last stanza says it ALL! The second line speaks volumes of truth! After reading this, I'm really proud of my own "doofiness!" :-)
Quigley Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 10:05 AM
Thanks, Walter!
Emu Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 2:39 PM
Great upbeat poem Tom. Enjoyed the read, Regards, Craig
Quigley Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 10:05 AM
Thank you, Craig!
Smith Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 12:39 PM
Nice one Tom...Yes we need to love ourselves first and have thick skin when it comes to others and their opinions...Hope the baseball season is going well for you Tim
Quigley Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 2:01 PM
Thanks, Tim!
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