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Don'T Write Me Off Today

Short attention span Mask a great thinking mind set Round boy tiger eyes Alert and learning into A man of thought inventions

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Christine A Kysely

Date: 1/27/2011 6:34:00 AM

Very Nice Doris...Its nice to see adhering to syllable counts and Tanka Rules!!! Christine

Daver Austin

Date: 1/26/2011 9:40:00 AM

Very interesting about the short attention span. My guess is that while attention is on one particular thing, that attention is powerfully focused. Enjoyed. Love, Dave

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/26/2011 6:09:00 AM

Great Tanka you posted with this one, Doris! And perfect to the Tanka-rules! Enjoyed the read this early afternoon....Gert

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2011 10:21:00 PM

Sure an intereting one, Doris. YOu have so many different ideas every day! Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/25/2011 7:49:00 PM

Poignant and powerful piece Doris.. luve the first two lines with the tiger eyes very vivid luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/25/2011 4:02:00 PM

Good one about that special big boy..Mom

Steven Henderson

Date: 1/25/2011 11:06:00 AM

Very creative Doris! Thank you for sharing! Steve

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/25/2011 8:04:00 AM

great minds thinks with speed of lighting; reminds me of einstein... such an enjoyable, fascinating read , doros! :) hugggs, nette