Don'T Waste Your Purple Nights

this poem is somehow dedicated to a little
lady dog Charlotte

I wrote it on the beach 
whilst picking up little 
stones shells and snails

I was at peace with 
me and the world

for a couple of hours
I set myself free of looking for 
a job 
and the insignificant thoughts of 
how to pay the rent

So yeah
Dave 
poetry is God

all in all
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 6/5/2015 7:41:00 AM
If poetry is your god how will she find you a job and put a roof over your head???
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Date: 5/23/2015 8:50:00 AM
Hi Che! In free verse you express yourself simply and clearly; even so you leave space for the reader to work out some things for himself. Your connection with nature is a positive one; you find peace while discarding the little material things that we often worry about unnecessarily. I take it that the reference to 'Dave' is self-addressed. All the best. // paul
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Date: 5/23/2015 9:46:00 AM
Thanks, Paul Poetry is God and God is a Woman ;)
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