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Don'T Want To Be a Princess

Let me tell you a story....
of a little girl who didn't want to be a Princess!!!!

it happened a long time ago, in the life of an adorable girl of seven,
who lived in the busiest humming city, enormously crowded. 

a gentle dreamy-eyed girl, who chose secret corners to read,
and play with her cherished dolls' house, which her father built.

as it happened..her father found a job..and it was an idyllic countryside,
excitedly she followed family, felt fortunate to be close to nature. 

a fairyland of her dreams, a picturesque hamlet surrounded by lush fields, 
lived in a cottage encircled by a gorgeous garden, bird-songs, and swings.

she went to the village-school, which was a mere walking distance,
carrying her backpack, water bottle, and books she needed. 

her father was the powerful manager of the local textile mill,
where most of the villagers worked, and earned their living. 

all the children glanced at her as if she were a Princess,
but this soft dainty lass craved to be purely one of them. 

she noticed...those children were walking barefoot to school, 
no backpack, no bottle of water, no shiny expensive clothes. 

end of the day, she returned home, and declared to her caring parents, 
"I don't need the backpack, bottle for water, or the stylish shoes...

starting from tomorrow, I am going to walk to school barefoot"
her parents were shocked, but didn't disagree with her at all.

from the following day, the warm friendly girl of seven,
felt totally comfortable and undoubtedly right, with her decision. 

all children were frolicking with her, no more was she a distant Princess, 
she was their delightful friend...sharing the same life they had in the village. 

she still remembers those eyes which sparkled with wonder at the way they were accepted, 
a lifelong memory was created, the gesture kindled a feeling of oneness. 


                                         April 16, 2022
                    For N - Form Narrative - New - Poetry Contest
                                           Theme:Life
                           Sponsor: Constance La France
                                        SECOND PLACE
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Peck Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 5:12 PM
Mala, That's a lovely story. I'm not a bit surprised you would join your schoolmates that way, since your poetry reveals a kind heart. :)
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 6:05 PM
Thank you, Ann, for reading the poem. It is a true story from my life - I myself am proud of the decision i took at that tender age. The experiences of those three years were precious!
La France Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 8:24 AM
Mala, congratulations on your win in my Narrative, Let me tell you a story ... contest, did you change the title ? blessings ~Constance
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 9:13 AM
Thank you, Constance. I feel honoured to be one of the winners. Yes, I changed the title a little bit. Love ~ Mala
Vangaveti Avatar
April 29, 2022 at 3:08 AM
OMG!! This is sure fave to me. How beautiful and full of life!!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 29, 2022 at 8:22 AM
Dear Swetha, delighted to read your comments. Your Fave - I feel truly honoured. This is a true story from my childhood.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 28, 2022 at 9:39 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win. A lovely story/write/picture. Love how you saw what was needed at a young age. Love for all not things. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 29, 2022 at 8:24 AM
Dear Paula, Your comments are so inspiring. I feel fortunate that I had the opportunity to spend a few years in a small village in India. It was a great learning experience, which my father wanted us to have.
Alex Avatar
April 28, 2022 at 7:10 AM
A very beautiful narration with a soft ending. Tyoical of yours. Congratulations!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 28, 2022 at 7:13 AM
Thanks, Christuraj. Typical of me! Appreciate your kind words.
Dietrich Avatar
April 24, 2022 at 12:13 PM
What a charming story. Is there a bit of your own story in it!?
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 25, 2022 at 4:53 PM
Yes, Andrea. it s a true story from my life. Thanks for reading, Dear Friend.
Lawrence Avatar
April 22, 2022 at 12:29 PM
A feeling of oneness dear Mala is the greatest gift . So insightful of you as a girl of seven to recognize the value in this which brought you closer to your pier group . I loved the nuance and details here ! Beautiful storytelling. Hugs to you and all blessings, Susan :)
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 25, 2022 at 4:56 PM
Thank you so much, Dear Susan. This is a true story from my life - I was a very quiet and shy girl, but valued the simplicity of children in the village.
Roper Avatar
April 18, 2022 at 7:33 PM
Wonderful story, Malabika. I read what you told Milt.. Blessings in life even with the smallest jester. Your a totally awesome person.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 19, 2022 at 8:21 AM
Thank you, Eve. It's wonderful and healing to share stories from our own life with friends who understand. My parents were really supportive - my father wanted his children to spend some time in a village environment - learning about nature and simple life. Those three years were a blessing to me, which I never forgot! Love ~ Mala
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 8:11 PM
You have done it again Mala….brought tears to my eyes and a lump in my throat with your talented story telling. I loved this! Happy Easter dear friend! Blessings xxoo
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 18, 2022 at 4:27 AM
Thank you, My Dear Connie. There are a few stories in my life I can never forget. I am glad that, even when so young, I took a right decision - which made a huge difference for some little human beings. Happy Easter to you. Blessings ~ Mala
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 8:12 PM
PS, I knew that little girl was you!
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 4:22 PM
Hello Mala, I hope you had a nice Easer. Thatgirl wanted to be part of the crowd. So she did what she had to do. Blessings my friend. Love & Friendship Darlene.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 18, 2022 at 8:19 AM
Hello Mala, I enjoy your story telling in poetry form. I am glad that you ha da good Easter celebration. LOve & Friendship Darlene.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 5:06 PM
Thanks, Darlene. Yes, I had a nice Easter. Really appreciate your encouraging comment.
Leffanta Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 11:46 AM
Using Pareto's 80/20 rule as a guide, 80% of students choose to "fit in" over personal development. Learning to get along well with others is a skill some students never learn . . . Aloha!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 5:05 PM
Thanks, Rico. Appreciate your encouraging words.
Hankins Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 8:28 AM
What a delightful story, Mala, and I suspect the little girl was you because you have grown up to be just such a woman as anyone might have predicted. Lovely writing.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 8:38 AM
Thank you, Dear Milton. Yes, this girl is me - I spent three years of my childhood in a small village where my father was working. Truly appreciate your uplifting words. Warm wishes ~ Mala
Brul Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 7:38 AM
What a splendid story! I like the part where you walked barefoot to school. You are excellent in narrative poems...This will surely reap top win. Loved this..Straight to my FAV list.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 7:42 AM
Thank you, Dear JCB. This story has remained in my memory for ever. I am so glad I took the right decision, and my parents supported me. I am so honoured with the FAVE! Love ~ Mala
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