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Don’t try to love me… Please...walk away Love someone else Just….hear what I say….. My love is sunshine My love is rain My love brings pleasure My love gives pain My love is darkness My love is light My love is weakness My love is might My love knows anger My love knows peace My love brings madness My love brings release My love is life My love is death My love suffocates My love gives breath My love is violent My love is calm My love is poison My love is balm No two days alike Not even two minutes One minute it’s serious The next it’s a game You bask in my glow You hide from my sting But you want me more… More than...anything Don’t love me, Baby Don’t hold on to me Say your sweet goodbyes And set your heart free Eileen Manassian

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Robert Lindley

Date: 2/10/2015 10:22:00 AM

You are a master at this kind of poetry my friend. Not just that its great but it takes the reader right along with it. That takes great talent my friend! A7 and another gem you've penned!!!!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/10/2015 10:42:00 AM

I'm so grateful for a visit to my older writes, Robert. Thanks ever so much! I can never hear praise enough! ;) I'm like a sponge. Thanks for the kind words. Bless you!

Shane Cooper

Date: 2/6/2015 5:52:00 PM

It is a poem delving deep into your heart and soul. You are wonderful for sharing youself with us. And it will not dissuade any one in the slightest from loving you. This the essence of yourself your inner beauty, it gives you the power to enchant. This dichotomy is where you dwell it is what makes you so wonderfully unique. Love Shane xxx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/7/2015 4:43:00 PM

Shane...you have been a blessing to me. Thank you for these words that have touched my heart. We all need someone in our corner. Thanks for rooting for me and understanding the dichotomy in my heart. Hugs

Paul Callus

Date: 2/6/2015 4:29:00 PM

Eileen...this strong, sincere poem is surely going to have the opposite effect of what you're pleading for!!! There's going to be an endless queue vying for your love!! // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/7/2015 4:06:00 PM

I'm not so sure about that, Paul. I'm a topsy turvy woman....High and low tide....oasis and desert....oh, but I do know how to love....passionately. People like me....need brave souls to weather out the storms so they can bask in the glorious sunlight. Thanks for this lovely lovely lovely comment. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/6/2015 10:26:00 AM

He would be a fool to walk away!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/6/2015 10:35:00 AM

Oh, Richard. Do you really think so? :( Thanks for the vote of confidence. It really really soothes my heart.

Poesy Relish

Date: 2/5/2015 9:58:00 PM

I love the way you have uses diadic pairs... its a perfect love song... hugs!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/6/2015 9:24:00 AM

Thanks for your visit to my poem, Don't try to Love Me, Nadiya. It's very sweet of you. Hugs

Justin Bordner

Date: 2/5/2015 8:33:00 PM

Your love is greedy....your love is selfless... Your love is insecure...your love is self assured...your love is precious...your love is vicious...that 6th verse is my favorite Eileen...a very beautiful self assessment...it makes you even more tempting my Beloved Poetess...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/6/2015 9:32:00 AM

My love IS all those things you mentioned.....and more.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/6/2015 9:31:00 AM

Thank you, Justin. Would that I could believe your words. I've lived and loved long and I know that complexities in character and volatility are not easy to take to the bosom and cherish. Ah...it only happens in stories like Wuthering Heights. I find myself with not much on hand to tempt with....Perhaps my words will do. Thanks for the lovely visit. You breathe life into my soul.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 2/5/2015 5:13:00 PM

love is precious eileen captures the heart in many degrees beautifully penned as always dear pal

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/6/2015 9:33:00 AM

Yes, Liam. Some people's love is constant...unchanging...and true...firm...and secure. That is a treasure. I believe you are such a man yourself...I wish you every happiness, my dear.

Emile Pinet

Date: 2/5/2015 11:03:00 AM

The repetitive use of the phrase "My love" strengthens the message of this poem and captures the attention of the reader. This use of repetition is successful in this application and sets the mood for this poem. Well done. Emile.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/6/2015 9:38:00 AM

As a teacher, I know that repetition has its place, Emile. I do use repetition quite a bit in my writes. Thank you for your positive comments. An appreciated visit....

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 2/5/2015 10:32:00 AM

Your love is tempestuous tumultuous raging sea furious winds angry clouds violent flaming hysterical, I know baby> Love Wondera. God bless.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/6/2015 9:39:00 AM

Thank you, Rajat. Yes, you know me well. Someone said I'm a Hurricane of a Storm. I am...but when the hurricane passes...I am spent. I am spent. Thank you for your lovely visit and words.

Kp Nunez

Date: 2/5/2015 9:17:00 AM

Can be a theme song of manic-depressives, including me. Oh but I love you anyway, Eileen. A 7, a fav and more love and smiles from the land of thousand isles...:D Kim

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 2/5/2015 10:34:00 AM

Oh Kim a theme song of manic-depressives Hahaha Wondera

Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/5/2015 9:20:00 AM

YES, Kim. That would describe me, sweetie! :( Though we say....DON'T LOVE ME....our heart cries the opposite. SIGH...Thanks for the visit dear. Hugs