Dont Think It Has One

i can feel you
dirtting my soul
fingers drawen across me
im screaming in pain
how come no one hears me
closing my eyes
the tears come pouring out
and all i can do if freaking scream
you will never know what it is like to be me
every day is so exusting
drowing in my own filth
some how grown accustom
 look 
at this disaster
a painted picture of me
lacking all emotion
i strugle to be
and fall to my knees
 
nothing can fix me
dont want your pitty
slashing away 
at my own skin
to carve out a place
some thing i am proud of
realizing to late
thers is beauty 
in destruction
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 1, 2010 at 9:22 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Greg. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
November 1, 2010 at 5:59 AM
Very creative and interesting thoughts you have penned so well, greg
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November 1, 2010 at 4:47 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write today with its impressive theme.. hope u enjoy your time on the Soup.. and will check out the contest page offered to members.. good luck with luv..
Christian Avatar
November 1, 2010 at 1:11 AM
wow this is so powerful because in reality many people feel this way who suffer with depression, as I read this poem I am so thankful to the Lord that he helps me with every situation and that he fixed me back up every time someone tried to break me to pieces, I am so very very lucky to have God in my life, even after been threatened with death threats and threats of harm I am still here and thriving, Praise be to God,
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