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i can feel you dirtting my soul fingers drawen across me im screaming in pain how come no one hears me closing my eyes the tears come pouring out and all i can do if freaking scream you will never know what it is like to be me every day is so exusting drowing in my own filth some how grown accustom look at this disaster a painted picture of me lacking all emotion i strugle to be and fall to my knees nothing can fix me dont want your pitty slashing away at my own skin to carve out a place some thing i am proud of realizing to late thers is beauty in destruction

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Date: 11/1/2010 9:22:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Greg. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/1/2010 5:59:00 AM
Very creative and interesting thoughts you have penned so well, greg
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Date: 11/1/2010 4:47:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write today with its impressive theme.. hope u enjoy your time on the Soup.. and will check out the contest page offered to members.. good luck with luv..
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Date: 11/1/2010 1:11:00 AM
wow this is so powerful because in reality many people feel this way who suffer with depression, as I read this poem I am so thankful to the Lord that he helps me with every situation and that he fixed me back up every time someone tried to break me to pieces, I am so very very lucky to have God in my life, even after been threatened with death threats and threats of harm I am still here and thriving, Praise be to God,
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