Don'T Take Me For Granted

DON"T TAKE ME FOR GRANTED
Many a times my fingers I have sadly burnt, I did not know why and who burned that fire. It was veiled behind your smile, I later learnt you enjoyed so much being an obsessed liar. The tapestry of dream you weaved for me disappeared like mirage in dunes of desert. In the miasma of deception you didn’t see how the molested self-pity broke my heart. You want now to take me for another ride the return of the old smile on your face I see. On garden path you won’t find me by your side for I know how delusively distant you can be. The life’s lesson you taught me made me wise. After my belief in human honesty got dented I no longer live in self-created fool’s paradise. So I tell you, don’t ever take me for granted.
August 11, 2018 Contest : Fool Me Once Sponsored by : Brenda Chiri

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Date: 9/4/2018 8:38:00 AM
So well written! Empowering! Congrats on your placement.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/5/2018 3:02:00 AM
Thank you, Haley for your visit and comments.
Date: 9/4/2018 5:19:00 AM
A true lesson in life. Never take someone or something for granted. Great write Subimal. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/5/2018 3:02:00 AM
Thank you, Charles for your comments.
Date: 9/4/2018 2:35:00 AM
CONGRATS. Last stanza is excellent.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/4/2018 3:19:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 8/11/2018 10:03:00 PM
Clever write, Subimal. I don’t take your writing for granted :) Best wishes in the contest!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/14/2018 1:09:00 AM
Thank you, LM.
Date: 8/11/2018 3:47:00 PM
Well done Subimal. Great for the contest too :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/14/2018 1:09:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi.
Date: 8/11/2018 5:28:00 AM
Impressive wording and metaphor employed to show that one can't be beguiled again by a smile that caused hurt in the long run. Kudos for the poetic endeavour here, great rhyming wow. Pleez do write your thoughts/comment under my newest poem too.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/14/2018 1:09:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and for the comments.
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