'don'T Smother Love'

Awesome one. I really like it. Congratulations, Wilma.

Congrats on your win...Sara

that's very witty! Many congrats on your win

hey Wilma, congrats on a great win, David

This is really cool Wilma, Congratulations on a neat idea. Agape, Moses

Congrats Wilma on your fantastic fourth place win with new form and great poetry my friend..luv..

nice Wilma. Congrats to you

Well spoken words of wisdom in a beautiful than bauk, congrats on your win Mrs. Wilma!

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Than-Bauk" contest Wilma. Love,Carol

Congratulations on the win in my contest, Wilma

The problem is too many people strangle their love by being overly possessive Wilma. It does need room to breathe. Thank you for your comment. Best to you, Diane

Just smother those wasps. he

Indeed, Wilma, Indeed!

Good advice. One must not smother another. Love, daver

Just like the Bee and the flower. Wilma, love this. Harry

oh how cool that you wrote in this form missy! that reminds me, my own got burned in that back burner-- haha better try my hand at this form again, thanks for the reminder-- love what you say here about love, even your title is so fitting-- you definitely got some good advice here, missy love ;) btw- thanks for taking time from your lunch break to read my work, I am honored missy boss! heehee

This is really quite profound, Wilma. There are people who "smother" their mates with attention and affection. Love needs freedom to flourish; it can't be reigned in. Awesome poem, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Nice job of the Than Bauk, Wilma. Fun aren't they?'i;ve got to break down and do another one. er sorry got you in trouble ...... nah! I'm not really.. heh heh . Glad you enjoyed. Nice hearing from you and once again enjoyed your Than Bauk. I like that form

numero uno, Great Than-Bauk! One day I'm going to write in this form...yep! number two; what a great thought ! Have a great week dear poet ! much love, james

Its a tough line to stay on, and I believe in my hear it takes wisdom and age to really understand when to pull back and when not too.. well anyway thats been my experience in my rollercoaster life of love and loss... Deep write my tender sweet Wilma N....love Michael

Love the message in your poem Wilma. Many a relationship has ended having been smothered. Nice one....:)

Wonderful message here,Wilma!Love it---kash

Yes, very true indeed, Wilma. I'd never heard of Than Bauk before - interesting form : ) Jack

So true Wilma.. luv is as free as the air we breathe.. holding it too tight it smothers..luv.. great lines of expression my friend..luv..

I know what that is like...I got accused of betrayal for moving on, when he left me high and dry in july and had no action to speak of, then smothers me with words of love with no action to speak of and constantly complaining if someone else takes an interest? imagine...snort