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Don'T Ride Em Cowboy

A cowboy is thrown from his horse Crash landing in dense prickly gorse He's screaming so loud It draws quite a crowd The ‘bucking feast’ - shot dead of course! 8,8,5,5,8 per HMS Checked with Rhymezone High Noon Poetry Contest Sponsored by Joseph May 05/03/22

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 7/25/2022 12:30:00 PM

Ouch..... Congratulations on your win with this one

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/24/2022 5:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Jan. Lol…very good! Blessings xxoo

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/9/2022 12:04:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Blessings my friend

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/9/2022 10:24:00 AM

Hi Jan, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. Have a nice day:-) Alexis

Eve Roper

Date: 5/9/2022 9:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Jan. Blessings my friend

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/8/2022 10:04:00 PM

Ha! Ha! Great! Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/8/2022 10:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A Huge Ouch. Pain is everywhere. A wonderful write. Have a blessed day/week writing away.......................

Joseph May

Date: 5/8/2022 10:38:00 AM

Ouch, Congrats on your win Jan, Very nicely penned

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/5/2022 3:05:00 PM

Tough way to discover the 'Gorse Pole' there! lol. Thanks, Jan

Rico Leffanta

Date: 5/4/2022 11:29:00 AM

Beast or feast? (Nothing quite like a lean horsemeat steak!) Welcome back, Jan! Aloha!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/4/2022 10:56:00 AM

ha! so delighted to see this poem of yours, jan! best of luck in the contest...

Susan Lawrence

Date: 5/4/2022 10:06:00 AM

I have missed your humor Jan ! Ouch ! I wouldn’t want to trade places with either the horse or the rider ! Hugs, Susan :)

Jenna Logan

Date: 5/3/2022 6:03:00 PM

Perhaps it was the rider who should’ve been shot for wearing spurs. Lol Jan.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2022 4:40:00 PM

poor bucking beast. hey, Jan, it's so good to see you around. I was thinking just the other day, what happened with you? My dear dog Snickers had to be put to sleep yesterday . My husband is taking it very poorly and it's all so sad. Anyway, I have my topic for the ode contest now. I hope to write something to do justice to my sweet dog's memory

Eve Roper

Date: 5/3/2022 4:33:00 PM

The Catus here so prickly it stings. good one, Jan.

Frederic Parker

Date: 5/3/2022 4:28:00 PM

just like us humans, blame the horse

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/3/2022 4:19:00 PM

WoW! Jan, This is a good one for the contest theme. I knew you wouldn't disappoint. I enjoyed this one. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day:-) Alexis

Margarita Lillico

Date: 5/3/2022 12:54:00 PM

Good one! Good luck!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/3/2022 1:02:00 PM

Thanks Margarita, I'm hoping my muse is back! hugs Jan xx