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Don'T Read

I told you not to read, still you are here Aren’t you reading just cuz I said not to, dear?? Haha! Got you! Reverse psychology it is Control that smile playing at your lips!! You couldn’t! Isn’t it? Now, don’t comment dear peer!!!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/6/2013 12:00:00 AM

but of course we are all commenting here!! hahaha

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2012 8:25:00 PM

Apoorva, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/14/2012 5:17:00 PM

Awesome poem! Hahahha Greatly enjoyed. We're all little rebels arent we? Always, Laura

Kash Poet

Date: 9/9/2012 4:14:00 AM

I haven't read it.But I have checked the syllable counts of this Limerick..Your rhyming scheme is perfect..But (if you are interested) please click on the form LIMERICK.. and have a look at the difference in syll count of lines 1,2,5 with those of 3 and 4..:)

Apoorva Patrikar
Date: 9/9/2012 5:29:00 AM

u haven't read it?? lolz nd ya i knw the syllable counts :Lines 1, 2, and 5 of have seven to ten syllables and rhyme with one another. Lines 3 and 4 have five to seven my lines 1,2,5 look almost a same as lines 2,4 but the syllable count is intact.

Len Gasun

Date: 9/8/2012 1:13:00 PM

ha ha ha.... i love it apoorva!!! sorry i am a person who is sometimes so curious lol... i am dropping by to say thank you for your congratulatory remarks on my winning and also for your precious time in reading some of my recent poems. i also apologize if my expression of gratitude comes only now because i got health problem recently, now i am getting better. i will read some of your poems also today and tomorrow. million thanks!!!!! hugs, leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/7/2012 11:13:00 AM

Curiosity takes over Apoorva. :) Very good - and funny. Thanks for visiting my poetry, You are always welcome back. Have a lovely weekend. - Oxox love Anne-Lise :)