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Don'T Need a Shove

Am I just one of a very rare few That feels this love of love Is it my age why I'm feeling this way Don't feel I need a shove Comes very natural to this old guy As with the younger souls Nothing special just run of the mill Love is part of my whole Thought that's how it'd always remain The way the world should be But men seem to have this penchant For countries to disagree Maybe us humans will get back on track And live our lives as one Instead of always fighting each other Forever keeping peace on the run Am I just one of a very rare few That feels this love of love Is it my age why I'm feeling this way Don't feel I need a shove © Jack Ellison 2013

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Date: 11/11/2013 10:30:00 AM
When we're younger we are into our own thing... So the tolerance is less for other things... Even our love is more single minded... Life is so busy we can't see any farther than our noses... When we get older we don't just give lip service to things... We seriously ponder them... and learn to truly enjoy life.. Dragon wants you to have many years of pondering and enjoyment...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/11/2013 10:44:00 AM
Did you actually write this my dear Carol... it was a breath of fresh air! You actually made some very astute comments to which I couldn't agree more! Thank you muchly for this my dear Carol!!!!!!!!! xoxox
Date: 11/11/2013 6:52:00 AM
This write is beautifully put my dear friend! I surely enjoyed reading this enlightening and sentimental poem this morning! What a special piece, such a lovely poem, Great Work!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/11/2013 7:00:00 AM
As they say... love is the answer no matter the question!

Book: Shattered Sighs